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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreSome say that tears, when shed, are healing Why don't I feel healed then I can tell you why But will you accept the truth Accepting responsibility and showing that you understand Are the steps to move forward There is a problem here Deep rooted Like an old...
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Thank you, Thomas 😊
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![Profile picture of DampKitten]()
Love your spacing… very effective emphasis. Second person narrative is such a powerful literary POV, and you’ve taken full advantage. The conversational tone reflects the overwhelming effort to maintain control. The piece is as much about self as it is situational management, and I think the limited information provided makes it all the more relatable.
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Thank you for letting me know that this is a relatable piece. It is not always easy to publish something that you second-guess yourself about. I really appreciate it, DK;))
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You’re right, and it’s important to defer the temptation of providing too much information. Poetry is frequently vague. That’s what makes it beautiful.
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Thank you, Wil;))l
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Fia. There is venom in those words my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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Heavy! Like this a lot.
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Thank you, Keith 😊
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![Profile picture of Poemstar]()
This is incredibly raw and honest. The way you describe the tears as rage, not sorrow, feels so real. Thank you for sharing this.
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Thank you for reading this. Poemstar
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Backdeckbenny (Peter) wrote a new post
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Read MoreYour body died but that wasn't youhow could it beyou're not even dust nowjust energy returned to the umiverse.Existing only in the mindsof those left behind.Dependent soley on perceptions of you when you lived.But who was it that lived?The body you inhabited did...
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Love this… great job… excellent flow… great authenticity…
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We are more than our physical bodies.
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There’s something very “Dr. Spock” about this. Logical. Pure Energy.
That’s some deep thinking, Peter. I’m heading into orbit.
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Brenda, this absolutely breaks the heart. I am sending you so much love & the biggest hug
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hello beautiful Willow thank you hugs back I will be alright I can’t help but write what I feel and everyday my mind is retracing it’a steps to the days we had together and how we got here ❤️
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Powerful work. Heartbreaking.
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hello dearest Thomas thank you for the love on this write ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Heartbreaking write, Brenda. This is powerfully penned my friend. Sending prayers and positive energy your way. Appreciate you.
Damian
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My deepest condolences to you & your family Brenda. Beautifully written my dear friend. Xox
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read MoreBiased figures manipulate opportunities Power has reigned since the dawn of time Spitting rhetoric laced with dry ambiguities False sincerity acted out in full pantomime Dreams are aborted before even catching breath Harsh reality of being worked and taxed to death Programmed from a young...
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![Profile picture of S. Libellule]()
Love this… great job Damion…
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, LDF. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This post, at first blush, leaves me with what to disagree with. After a second read, and seeing the layers underneath, it is powerful and insists that one consider it on the deeper level. Many thanks and blessings. <3 Echo
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Echo. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fist in the air, I’m over here going “Yeah! And…yeah!” All the way through this one. I remember this one & I’m glad she followed you over. Some truths should never fade into darkness. Favorite line:
Only way to quit the lie is to go cold turkey
That is gold, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I loved that line as well. It ranks high as one of my best in my opinion. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Raw and gritty. Love it.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Totally agree…
We got a shitstorm of rhetoric and meaningless ambiguity to wade through. I remember the term “Double Speak” from Orwell’s 1984. So legitimate. The dude had the future pegged.What we need round here is another Nostradamus and some hymnals.
Great write
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, DK. So glad you connected with the write my friend. He did get some of it spot on, indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Love your raw writing man ❤️🔥
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Poe. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Phenomenal piece Damian. Nice work.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
I like the flow of this and the tenderness of it.
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Thank you my dear.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, PAR. A great light airy kinda write my friend. Almost sounds like I’m describing a wine tasting competition. lol. Incredible as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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More of a name tasting. Names have incredible flavours.
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Love the concept PAR. Cool piece with some awesome imagery.
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Obrigado, meu amigo! ❤
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