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Read MoreIf given the choice between terminal cancer or immortalality, I would choose cancer everytime. Imagine waking up every day for ever and having to make the bed,do the washing,get the groceries,tend to family,go to work....sounds like hell to me. I'll take...
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Read Moresomber notes play in my headlulling me into my dark placefitful desire to be numbmy heart feels too muchaching rebellion I dull the painbut the hurt it shinesbright with hints of redmakes my thoughts turn blackthe world of the...
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Tremendous work. Vivid and sharp.
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hello dearest Thomas good evening thank you graciously I appreciate your thoughts 💕
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I’m happy you’re back❤️
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hello beautiful poetess thank you graciously for the love on this 💕
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Amazing Crimsin
Thank you for sharing this piece🙏🏻-
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hello dearest Drieks thank you graciously I appreciate you 💕
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously I cherish your thoughts 💕
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” rebellious need paints me a villain
no harlot, nay
a poet of chance, instead ”Never…none like you, Brenda.
Bravo
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hello dearest Naajir good morning thank you graciously my friend I deeply appreciate you 💕
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Thank you, Hj xoxo
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hello beautiful Fia this is so passionate and painful I only hope it is fiction love can be cruel 💕
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Thank you, crimsin. Yes it is fiction. I am glad you felt something from this. xoxo
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Fia. Simply amazing write my friend, you changed it up a little on this one. Excellent! Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. I always want to try something new. Always appreciate your comments.
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![Profile picture of RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS]()
Awww, Fia =(
How poignantly vivid your pen has laid its sorrows’ disappointments upon our hearts … so many times we’ve gone through such relatably plaintive ache, yet, your poetic emotion expresses it all so vividly, as though it could be any one of us experiencing your own moments of disquiet.
“Love is a demon’s creation.
It obscures and twists the mind,
That being in complete submergence is good.”Oh, yes! Nothing’s like LOVE it when it’s good, when all is wine and roses; for, love shall seek not but for its own satisfaction. It will bend and twist you, and shine and dim upon you, while holding onto those within its grip. And, there is no single answer to the question of what love really is, but I have learned that when love is in control, there are no guarantees.
I so admire the smoothness and imagery with which you paint emotions, feeling, and thoughts upon the canvas our minds, hearts, and souls … the hallmarks of a true artist’s touch.
Swearing we’ll never fall in-love again, our needs are far too deep not to.
Beautiful work, Dear Poetess … thank you for sharing! ⁓ Richard🖌Superb artwork choice:
(V2L1, add an apostrophe to Passion’s)-
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“Excellent use of metaphor, too.”
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I think of immortality from another side of what you’re saying. If you’re immortal but only you…imagine constantly being around to witness the fall of everyone you know & care about? No thank you. I’m with you on this one