It feels like there is fear here.bto strike the keys to get the perfect tune.
Like the piano is the task master with no sympathy

Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write my friend, feels like the muse gets what she needs in the end. I couldn’t pick a verse though, because they’re all fucking tight. Nice work. Appreciate you.

Damian

“no monster hidden in my ribs
no god curled under my sternum
no poetry sloppily written across bone
just muscle workin outa habit
organs promisin survival
an emptiness runnin straight thru the center
where meanin should’ve lived”

Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write my friend. The lines above are my favorite, but this write was full of great lines brother. Nice work. Appreciate you.

Damian

The way you strip yourself down to the bones and done with precision. Nicely done 253

Ok you had to do seven not just one. lol These are really good.

Okay, I’ve never written a Senryu in my life, I’m too lazy to do that. I don’t know much about them: when I saw they were difficult to do correctly, I moved on to my own difficult mise-en-scène: blowing up words and phrases until they made people laugh, regardless of spelling, context or what others thought. But I do know good, smart writing when I see, read, or hear it (my favorite), and you’ve certainly shown us you have that in spades. Or in Senryus at least. Nice work.

“shadows bark my name
I toss one a broken thought
it brings back a grin”

“clarity short out
thoughts glitch like gods on crack
I praise the misfire”

Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent writing my friend. Dig these lines above. I couldn’t pick one over the other, killer fucking lines brother. Appreciate you.

Damian

much appreciated Rich. I enjoyed learnin it from ya.

I love mathematics at least up to algebra. Lol. This brings a layer of heat that’s calculated and sensual. Very nice

Passionately penned, 253. Excellent write my friend. The last stanza drove the point home. Appreciate you.

Damian