thanks Damian

appreciate that

Intense the imagery of falling but it is internally.

OH MY FUCKING GOD YES! I have this in my word list — I keep a list on my phone notes of words that tingle: Schadenfreude, Bifurcate, Aposematic, Etiology… so the title drew me in.

And good goddamn you told the story in lyric. IT WAS SO GOOD.

This was a standout. This was the stanza that made me come back three times:
there’s a particular beauty
to watchin someone burn
inside their own bullshit
the way the smoke
keeps spellin their name
long after everythin else forgets it

THE WAY THE SMOKE KEEPS SPELLING THEIR NAME?! That is brilliant and I’m in love with the image.

Really well penned.

Betty

aprreciate you Damian. like when get to see what parts stood out.

Beautifully written and heartfelt. Gives dark knight vibes

Terrific write even though I find love to be more whimsical and fleeting,less obsessive.
Lots of things to like about this piece.
Keep up the good work.
🙏

Well done.

Powerfully penned, 253. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Loveliest read..