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Read MoreI say itusually in ways that hurt a littlein the wrong keyin the wrong tonewith a smirk I can’t controland a mouth that prefers to bitebut I fuckin say itI give you pieces of musicstill bleedin from my fingersno...
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thank you
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Damn, point made. lol Favorite Stanza’s
“I say it
in eye contact
that borders on violent”“I meant every destructive moment
with all my god damn heart”-
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got point across? thank you
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Oh damn…this is so powerful. I don’t even have words…
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always take that as compliment from you.
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Read Morei never learned to leave things aloneif it’s in reachit’s already mine doesn’t matter who it belongs toI takethat’s what I dothat’s what I’ve always fuckin done the bottle?it never had to ask twice I always emptied itthe mania?it feels...
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interestin which lines stand out to people. appreciate it.
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“mercy started fallin into my lap
like I hadn’t spit in its face yesterday”Powerfully penned, Ambjr. I’d be lying to myself, saying I haven’t chewed some of the same dirt you speak of my friend. I can relate to the lines I quoted. It was a battle with myself to think I deserved a second chance, it kinda fell in my lap as well. I still have moments that I don’t think I deserve good things. Into the book it belongs! Incredible spill my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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appreciate you sharin where you relate.
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Read Moremornins find me chasin ghosts thru sound and silencewhile somewhere in the mistnumbers dance without my permissionI've fashioned a structure from absencefrom the spaces before expectation where hours stretch waitin to be shaped into whatever the day demandsseeds planted...
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Powerfully penned, Ambjr. An incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you
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You make this sound like it’s a far off place instead of it being in reality. Like the construction of this.
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thank you
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Read MoreI want to crawlbelly to the dirt face to the floor like this pain is worship where I bleed at its feetand lick the grime from its bootslap up the poison that burns my veinsslow draggineach inch a fightconcrete...
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Sometimes its one more minute, one more hour, one more day…seeming Pyrrhic victories. Well told.
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ain’t that the truth. thank you
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I understand writing through it to get it out. favorite line “there’s no mercy in this crawl
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sometimes that’s only way to the other side. appreciate it.
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Powerfully penned, Ambjr. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thanks damian
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Read Moreit hit hardnot a pournot a pulljust the scentwarm and familiar like old breathon the edge of blackout I counted my daysthen I counted the distance and found there wasn’t anyjust an achejust the heatand that same hunger curled upright...
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Powerfully penned, Ambjr. I can relate believe me, those moments completely suck. It can feel like a dog staring and studying you. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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definitely. bein round it doesn’t usually get me. but got hit with it after a smell other day. thanks
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definitely the nature of the beast. thanks
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Powerfully penned, Ambjr. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian