Very powerful and thought provoking. A child learns from the parent. Then as adults we have undue some of teaching to live the life we want.

Powerfully penned, Ambjr. Some behaviors are definitely learned, it’s tough carrying the burdens of others. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

There’s definitely something to be said about the devil ya know…

You created a hell spawn that just want to go home. Nice

Cleverly penned, Ambjr. Fantastic ending my friend, history can be a vicious circle. Excellent write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Ambjr, you write this like a soul baring exercise in poetic genius. Really spoke to me these words. Like a mighty rumbling force of nature this read was for me.

John

Yeah I can see and feel the threat. The ending was like a spit in your face

Powerfully penned, Ambjr. This write has layers my friend, incredible work. Appreciate you.

Damian

The noise is breaking you down, and you cannot see the way out other than to let it talk till it dies out. Interesting.

hello dearest poet you have to fight that I do with my voices which is different but blocking them out is the same I still feel them around me at a perimeter but I don’t let them take over this is a great write 💕

I don’t know if I’m reading this correctly, but this feels much like the demons we build in our minds from voices heard or implied over years. The voices become our own. And there’s no escaping the mind. Powerfully written

Powerful work.

Mic “Fucking” Drop!

Lovely piece! Keep up the good work.

Powerfully penned, Ambjr. I know all the symptoms and reasons very well, your description is spot on my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.

Damian