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Read Morethey say it beganwhen fire ripped open the darknot lightjust a wound bleedin heatraw and screaminit burned fast and greedywith a hungerthat swallowed silence whole water rose to meet itswellin with purposerollin over every crackrisin up against the flamepressin air...
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thanks for the inspiration. always enjoy when ya challenge me.
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Superb work.
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thank you thomas
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Holy crap! This is…incredible! Some of the most beautiful flowers grow in areas of absolute adversity. That last stanza…ouch… & one helluva solid fact
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damn. appreciate this compliment
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Knocked this challenge out of the park, Ambjr. The depth of the imagery is precise, and the words are soaked in gasoline. Combustible write my friend, excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thanks. chose creation since usually write more on destructive side. was enjoyable challenge.
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Read MoreI’ve used your loathinto fuel my self hatredyour poisonous words stuck on repeatlike the same keys struck too harda wrong note hammered again and againtil the sound carved itself into me you built me wrongstitched me sloppyleft seams raw and...
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The way you bare the truth & spill it…it often leaves me speechless
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I take that as compliment. thank you willow
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Powerfully penned, Ambjr. This one goes for the jugular my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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appreciate you
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Read Morethere was a timeI swore my skin was thickerbut it was only paper soaked in bloodlayers of half healed woundssoft enough to tear with your teeththin enough to rip when touchedsloppily stitched togetheralways ready to split at the seams I...
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Damn, this gave me the chills. Good write
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appreciate it
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Powerfully penned, Ambjr. Into the book it belongs! Phenomenal imagery my friend, incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thanks Damian
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Read Moreyou said the sharpest pathis the simplest oneshave away the excessstrip the noise to bonetil only truth remainsbut truth never stays stillit paces in the corner of my roomdrags me outa sleep at 3 a.m.with my father’s breath still...
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Interesting simplicity is a lie…To oversimplify is the problem. Nothing that is severely complicated can be tied up in a bow. Too much would be left out.
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exactly
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Read MoreI don’t have timeto fall off the edge of the world todaythe horizon can fuckin waitthere’s a buzz in my chestlike i swallowed a stormtoo sharptoo fastand lightnin got stuck in my throat and refuses to leave I hate my...
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Never enough time in 24 hours of the day to many things. Always something more has to be done except to take time to care for your self.
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You put so much emotion into the description. This is a great piece
Fav lines: pressin air into steam
turnin breath in gasps
drownin out sparks
in its ancient name