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redzone posted in the group National Poetry Month
MaryJane’s Last Dance
It was day 23 of Poetry Month
when you walked through the door,
And I said,
“Oh my, my. Oh hell yes”
as my eyes landed on
that party dress;
thigh high red with
a side slit stare, and
I was pulled into your sway.
MaryJane delights
played in my mind,
like how smoke and fog
swirled in kaleidoscope air,
and we be…Read More4 Comments-
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Thank you Fia, your comment is appreciated muchly
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I read “side slit stare” and the scene was set, the mood and everything that followed owned the room!
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That dress!! I knew I was in big trouble….lol ;0)
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
Hello Me
It has been a while
You reached a plateau
traveling many milesWhat you failed to do
Is see what is occurring around youOr you’re choosing not
Not to see
Not to hear
Not to “oh my” share??Me this can not be
Your voice and thoughts need..need..To be set free
Free from the confines
Of societies vines…Read More2 Comments-
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Hello you, it’s just me. ;0) pretty cool poem Fia.
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Thank you so much;))
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I feel you on this lovely Fia I used to clam up like that when my kooky thoughts would come but I can’t hold them anymore…be yourself lady we will love you ❤️
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Thank you Crimsin. I will keep being me;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. It feels like inner dialogue to me, you and your subconscious kinda vibe. Nicely done as always. I can relate.. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian, Yeah, it is inner dialogue. Sometimes I need to set myself straight. lol
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These conversations with self are some of the best. I enjoyed the way this one wove the reader into it
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Thank you willow. Yeah, sometimes sitting and just think things through of what happened or what should happen. Helps.
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This is excellent. It had some rhyme and rhythm.
Nothing felt forced at all.
Great stream of consciousness amiga:)-
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Thank you, I just let whatever I was thinking come out. thank you;))
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Sometimes its necessary to pause, reflect and take inventory. I like the honesty because we do tend to lose sight for a while until we become more aware of ourselves.
Nicely done.
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Christopher and
Curly Grace are now friends
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Willow posted in the group National Poetry Month
F*ck the Game
anyone could tell you
I was never a raving beauty
even my family would agreetoo many freckles
not enough oomph
that indefinable thing
(whatever it was)
that made other girls stunningthink of them as Barbies
and me…a paper doll
not much without all the added extras
and even they left details…Read More2 Comments-
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YES!!!! EXACTLY!!!! Say it loud and proud, Willow. -Curt
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Thank you, Curt!
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We dance in those empty spaces. (That’s the best memory ) Very nicely done