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• 11 months, 4 weeks ago

Mojito Dreams

Poetry

September 26, 2025

8

You take me to a dream of nonsensical promisesOf rainbows and diamonds falling from the skyA kiss placed strategically on the browScreams of hidden thoughts and wants Why should we not indulge in a dreamAllow liberties and fanciful playOnce awakened...

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8 Comments
- Tim
  11 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  This is whimsical with beautiful wording throughout, Fia. Really nice work. 🙂
  - Fia Naturie
    11 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Tim;)) <3
    - RomaJ
      11 months, 4 weeks ago
      
      I felt instantly swept into a pure, sensuous dream. Every line is brimming with color, desire, and such a playful, intoxicating energy. It’s more than a cocktail; it’s a feast for the senses.
      
      Fia Naturie
      11 months, 4 weeks ago
      
      Thank you, Romaj…It’s a feast for the senses…appreciate that;))
- Damian DeadLove
  11 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! I love the playful nature of this write my friend. Excellent! Appreciate you, cuz.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    11 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Damian;))
- Visions_of_Insanity
  11 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Nice work Fia. You’re a wonderful poet!
  - Fia Naturie
    11 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thank you so much, Vision
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• 11 months, 4 weeks ago

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• 11 months, 4 weeks ago

The Final Resolution

Poetry

September 26, 2025

4

I was discouraged at therapy that my face was hideousNo one knew a sinner unless they looked at their fatherThe mother of your sons biological abortionLike a pistonLike a slug waiting to eat saltDisintegration of the molten force underneath...

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4 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  11 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Keith. This is classic you my friend. The Dr. Seuss of horror. I’ve missed you brother. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    11 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Miss you too Damian. Appreciate the feedback!
- RomaJ
  11 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  This poem is raw and fearless. The line about the father hit especially hard – it carries so much weight and truth. The imagery throughout is visceral and powerful, like a scream turned into poetry.
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    11 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thanks for the awesome feedback!
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• 11 months, 4 weeks ago

The Obliging Neighbor

Short Stories

September 26, 2025

6

This morning I just looked out my windowAccross the streetI saw my neigbor place a gun to his dog's headHe blew the dog's brains out all over the placeHe walked calmly back into the houseA few moments laterHe dragged...

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6 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  11 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Now it makes me think who needed to be trained the child and dog or the parents not watching them at all????
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    11 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Getting rid of annoyances around my neighborhood would make me quite happy. Thanks Fia
- Damian DeadLove
  11 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Keith. What kinda neighborhood you living in? lol. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    11 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    I live in Mr.Robinson’s neighborhood. That’s a deep cut from early SNL. Thanks Damian.
- Paula Jobi
  11 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  I love the unexpected! This was fantastic!
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    11 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thanks Paula! You rock!
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