Powerfully penned, Brenda. Always layers in your writes my friend, this one does as well. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

As above, so below. As within, so without. Always you walk in the liminal light of esoteric thoughts. And always a pleasure to read 🌼

Ur on to bigger better things fresh start where did u go y haven’t you called miss ur face friend

Powerful work. Tremendous.

Hello Brenda. Mesmerizing piece of melancholy poetry. I can feel your pain and sadness. Your heart will find happiness with your new surroundings. All in time. xo

Bravo.. Excellent presentation, Fia. Poetry will never die, with so many great writers keeping it alive. Besides, I’m not qualified to do anything else. lol. Appreciate you.

Damian

Informative piece. The presentation was done well.

Great video. You have a very pleasant voice! ☺️
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Poetry is like the moon. It never gets old.

Very true! Like all forms of art…it evolves! Painting, music and POETRY! It desires a response. You may try to evoke one feeling and end up being perceived entirely different! You are great. Poetry will never die! Like love it will be in a multitude of forms.

This is good. Why would it be the only story you write ?

Powerfully penned, Tim. I wouldn’t give up on storytelling my friend, this is a really good story. I liked this a lot, If I’m ever in the neighborhood, we’ll take a walk. lol. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerful work. Great storytelling.

Don’t listen to nay sayers Tim
I did that with my art stuff
Listened to the wrong people tell me my stuff wasn’t any good
Then I stopped listening and said to myself
I’m doing this for me
Fuck everyone else

Keep writing stories Tim

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I enjoyed this. I grew up with trains and hobos, so the subject is something I find very interesting. You say you’ve just started writing short stories and in my book, you’re off to a bang up start. Also, your writing is lean and correct–just the way it should be.

Powerful work. Excellent.

Time this is engaging prose that took me into the scene. You write excellent accounts and I for one am a big fan of your writing here. Truly hauntingly powerful. Starts off like an ordinary day and then full of surprises.

John