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    Memory

    Blood drips slow from the ceilingOh it tastes like rustHead's poundingSirens screamingMy mind’s combustCops poundingThe door’s caving in“Where were you” they shout“where’ve you been”I’m blankI’m hollowThe reel won’t playNo pastNo shadowJust a foggy grayIron tastes like memoryBitter and coldQuestions...

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    • This has a surreal aspect to it. The iron tasting like memory is brilliant. Mind sees blood

    • Brilliantly penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Phenomenal lyrics my friend especially that chorus, love the drive of the musical arrangement, the beat is almost trance like. Excellent work. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Thank you Damian! 🙏🏻

    • This is awesome! I’m sorry I’m late to this post!!
      Just wow!!

    • I can’t thank you enough for your beautiful words. I am pretty bad at accepting compliments so bare with me.
      Also, english is not my native language so if I say something that doesn’t make much sense, I apologize!

      But thank you for saying all this to me. Truly.
      And no, I do not realize I help people through my words but it is really nice to think I can/do.

      ❤️

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    Wicked Woman

    somethin’ bout the way she movessubtle yet so attractivethe innocent way her body groovesshe’s a hurricane burning radioactiveseductive eyes that mystifymakes you wanna fucking danceshe’s the spider, yeah you’re the flycaught up in a web of circumstance… don’t turn your...

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    • That’s one helluva wicked woman you just poemed Damian .. way to go my friend .. if you would kindly send me her coordinates I will stop by and convey my regards .. Neville

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. That she was, her coordinates were lost in the late 90’s. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I love this, Damian. It reminds me of “Witchy Woman” by the Eagles. 🌾🕊️

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. That’s high praise, and good company. What a lovely comment. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I wish I could hear the music behind it. Perhaps someday we’ll get a glimpse of your energy and fire within your lyrics. Good one, Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Well through GarageBand and Logic Pro, I’m working on that. lol. The problem with not being able to play an instrument, is that it only leaves a few options. So I’m working on a solo album to give these old lyrics a home, there will be new lyrics as well. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I sincerely hope this one makes the album cut! I so badly wanna hear it! It moves like a snake, undulates down the page. Perfect for the lyrics, my friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with lyrics my friend. I plan on this one making the cut, I’ve always wanted “Wicked” to have music again. It had music in 97, but it was never recorded. Thanks for your continued support it means a lot to me. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • This is fire, friend. Everyone loves a wicked woman.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That’s the theory.. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I can hear this playing in some club… maybe even a strip club!? LOL
      It has a great beat to the lines. It’s also very entertaining! Awesome job Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I try, I always write to the beat in my head. Maybe a strip club, or some other place where human beings gather. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Killer piece dude. You’re a talent my friend.

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    red

    entertaining madness I weep in the maelstormhazardous need inviting meto wet my feet in the pool of turmoilthere are emotional sharks swimming in the currentsmy soul senses the dangerbut I don't stopI'm swimming in over my depthspassion drowns meand...

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    • What depravity does the rip tide take you to..

      This is a good write which understands the power of lust.
      😜

      • hello dearest Benny good evening thank you graciously ❤️have a great night…

    • Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • hello dearest Damian it’s so good to see you I thought we lost you thank you graciously❤️

    • Lust is a beast! You wove this one with a silken hand, Brenda. That ending was about dead on perfect 🧡

    • Crimsin, this is fantastic! You weave this emotional tour de force into a poem of great seductiveness. You make an emotionally sensual poem of the highest order here. I could feel the rip tide through you words. And the ending couldn’t have been better. Truly a resolution to surpass them all. Loved this all the way.

      John

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    Wild With Love

    I kiss my Delilah,molten love pours from my soul,igniting her with sweet madness.  I melt her with flattery,as fire does to snow. In wakeful dreams I am not alone. 

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