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Read MoreI recall many nights with you,Under the skies of mid-December It seemed almost nightly, you were wearing that nightie We called it “ugly pink”, remember? My eyes would secretly glideUp and down that satiny gownHungrily drinking, the shiny fabric clinging To every curve...
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Thanks for visiting, Peter. I’m pleased you found some delight in the piece.
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This is a bit dreamy. I like how you reminisce.
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Thanks for reading and dreaming with me, Fia!
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A truly mesmerizing encounter you paint so exquisitely. I really love the composition here and your imagery is sensual magic. Erotica at its finest.
John
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Read MoreHow did I forget your faceWhen I can still feel your embraceHow can I still smell youBut fail to recognize these pictures in which I held youMy disease is the worstAt least that's what people say when they remind...
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Excellent lyrics my friend, your work is so authentic and direct. I’m truly a fan, good musical choice as well. The piano added the proper element to your words. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I always love reading your thoughts on my work. Appreciate you!
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I love a good piano song. This feels very intimate and un-rushed.
It has a great tempo too. There are not a lot of distractions either. Just a voice and a piano.
Just wonderful:)-
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Thank you so much! Your words bring warmth to my heart ❤️
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Adelphina was raving about this to me earlier, so I had to check it out. And it’s really good! Not syrupy or overdone. It’s catchy and very entertaining. Awesome job with it.
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Thank you for your kind words Styxian. I’m so happy to hear you enjoyed it!
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Drieks, I smiled the whole way through listening to this. This was sad but catchy.
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Thank you Fia! So happy to make you smile! 💕
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I man…damn. This is incredibly well done!
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Thank you so much Willow! ❤️
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Thank you so much for your kind words!
If only it was my own voice… Can’t take credit for that. -
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❤️
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We’ve kept up wit your musical success through mutual friends, and we’re truly happy for you. You’re not only creating great poetry but also great songs. Tight
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Thank you so much for the kind words!
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Great song. I loved the piano and the strength of the vocals. Well done!
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Thank you RPM! I appreciate it.
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Wow. Just wow! Another incredible piece. You are doing marvelous work, my friend. This is truly outstanding. Beautiful words, lovely music and all of it rendered with class. I am so glad that HER said I must talk to you. I would very much like to do that.
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Thank you so much! I’ll get back to you tomorrow if that’s ok 🙏🏻
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Absolutely.
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Read MoreI floated in stillness--cradled by an amethyst sea,golden light bloomingacross sapphire waves of violet flame.The sky stretched wide in bronze and rose,scarlet clouds suspended mid-air,their edges sharp against deep indigo.The weight of the world lifted,as heaven painted the skiesin...
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Amethyst is one of my favorite colors.
This is a very soothing read.
Like reading lavender, if that makes sense 🙂
Beautifully done:)-
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Thank you! I’ve been having this recurring dream of an amethyst sea, and reflecting on it gives me such inner peace. Now I even own many amethyst gemstones. Adelphina, your words about it being soothing really resonate. I love swimming just as the sun is setting.
It’s such an ethereal experience. The water feels as warm as the sunset, and the sky’s colors are breathtaking. Perhaps that’s why I dream of this sea, and I’m happy I was able to capture this experience in Amethyst Sea. I’m so glad it came across that way!
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Beautifully penned, Roma. A very colorful write my friend with stellar imagery. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much, Damian! I really appreciate you noticing the imagery and color– those beach sunsets here on the island, where I live are my biggest inspiration. Appreciate you too, friend!
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Read MoreIn blackened dreamsa mist descends from the hills Unsuspecting Only the dust moves,like a funeral veil of melancholy Sorrow The traveler of unknown plainsthrough darkness & light Confusion Flowers of desirable bloomLethal in touch and smell Death
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This feels haunting and ethereal. The imagery of mist, dust, and fatal blossoms captures that eerie beauty of twilight so well. A powerful blend of melancholy and mystery.
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Hi Romaj. Thanks for the feedback. Appreciated!
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Very scary walk. I love the description.
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Perfect for the time of year. Thanks Fia.
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I love this twilight mood in the forest which you describe perfectly here. A little dangerous, magical and most mystical! A mind blowing imagery in this awesome poem, my friend!
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Thanks my dear friend…Always!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Into the book it belongs! Dig this, brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. You rock!
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Over deliciously penned, my friend.
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Your comments are very gracious. Appreciate it
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Delightful piece and a lovely memory for you.