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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
Just Think
Walking in with a smile
Feeling light as if at this very moment was the bestWalking in with a frown
Feeling pulled down and weary as if gravity has a vendettaA tune comes to mind
“Don’t worry be happy”A tune comes to mind
“Everybody hurts”Open the window
A beautiful butterfly fly inOpen the window
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Read MoreI'm not holding backI'm just hiding it wellIt's carried in the painOf the stories I tellBlink and you missIn between the linesYou may feel the sorrowIn the sign of the timesYou won't hear the painIf I muffle the soundYou...
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Thank you Fia!
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Powerfully penned, Brandon. Another excellent write with clever wordplay my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreWalking in with a smile Feeling light as if at this very moment was the best Walking in with a frown Feeling pulled down and weary as if gravity has a vendetta A tune comes to mind “Don’t worry be happy” A tune comes to...
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with amazing insight and wisdom my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you cuz. I really appreciate you.;))
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Read MoreAn Autumn Moon Night “Gonna get into it baby down where it’s tangled and dark... When we get through it baby you’re gonna give up your heart. Gonna get a little risky baby Oh, that’s my favorite part.” ~~Bonnie Raitt oooo When I first saw you the moon was...
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Is this a song? It’s cool. I like it
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First, Thank You, Fia. I’m glad you liked this poem. Second, I am not sure it’s a ‘song’. I think to make it a song there would have to be a lot of editing, along with some experimentation. I am not sure I would know how to do this. The poem was written as I was listening to this Bonnie Raitt song, so besides quoting some of the lines found in that song, I think some of the rhythm of the song did find its way into the poem. But to be truthful, this was more an accident than intended.
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Read MoreRewriting Memory I’ve said it many times, over, and over again Guilt is a needless load to carry forever The solution comes in asking for forgiveness Or you else can’t go on happily with new endeavors And though it’s all in the past you...
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That’s all we can do is get up and keep going.
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It’s within our nature.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Powerfully penned, Wally. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian, always appreciate your reads and comments.
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Very good. The rain is a good cloak to hide the tears.