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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Here is the Eye’s Open sonnet. Thank you, Richard, for helping me understand the nuances of a sonnet
Was born with eyes wide-open on that day,
to be prepared for seeing every truth …
not wanting to offend in any way,
for what had happened up there on the roof.While holding onto pasts, like in a box …
we crawled, we stood, we soon beg…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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Beautifully rendered, Fia
You make sharing and teaching a distinct pleasure.
Thank you for always joining-in and inspiring us! ⁓ Richard-
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Thank you
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“KLINK!”
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Nice to see the structured discipline.
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Thank you, Jim;))
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Now this is what I call perfect poetry
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Thank you, Sam:))
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Thank you so much for the compliment. I enjoyed the processes and your guidance.
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Anytime, Fia,
The pleasure of sharing with You is a true blessing! ⁓ Richard🖌
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Should have been: “V2, L2&4”
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Goodness-ME, Fia!🍷
I’m amazed at how well you’ve done with your first effort at writing a Sonnet … it just goes to show the wonders waiting to be unlocked and freed under the surface of one’s bountiful potential.
This is no small accomplishment, and one you should be exceedingly proud of, as only a rare few of all poetesses and poets can compose a correct Sonnet. The Sonnet form is known as the Rolls Royce of poetry, and due to its “iambic pentameter” requirement many give-up before ever mastering its beautifully rhythmical unstressedSTRESSED meter.
How exemplary your natural creativity fits so smoothly into the diction and syntax of each line, and how perfectly your lines enjamb and break. Emotion, metaphor, imagery, grammar, spot-on rhymes (except, V2, L3&4, but it’s near-rhyme and can be addressed anytime) … also, your all around theme and ambiance are held faithfully throughout.
Poignantly sad, you convey a tale so many can relate to in so many ways … you’re an amazingly original poetess, Fia, with a broad potential to master the art of poetry few possess.
Thank you for sharing your lovely potic skills, to inspire us all at the “Back to Poetry Basics” group.
You make an olde bard ‘n teacher so proud and ohhhh-sooo very happy! ⁓ Richard🖌 -
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent sonnet my friend, you can do anything you put your mind to cuz. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you needed help with this, but it came out good;))
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Tremendous work.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
This is my “Magic of Poetic Voice” submission
The Beast Confession
Confessions are made to come from the heart
To make you feel the weight of it
Whether is it good or bad from the start
I need you to sit and understand me a bitI wandered into a space without time
Alone with my thoughts
Never hoping that someone could be…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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This is my Magic of Poetic Voice submission
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The Beast Confession
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·Confessions are made to come from the heart
To make you feel the weight of it
Whether is it good or bad from the start
I n…Read More
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Benjamin Scraps and
Astronomer are now friends
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Oh yes… you have piqued
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lol, Oh really?;))
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Piqued but not peaked.💋
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Haha, thank you Peter;))
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Passionately penned, Fia. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian;))
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An exciting time in a relationship. Clearly, beautifully stated.
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Thank you, Jim;))
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Chère F.,
I was not looking in your direction
You made my head turnO yes, definitely!
Warm regards, Gus-
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Thank you, Gus
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A very fresh read. Uplifting too.
Regards
James-
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Thank you, James. I appreciate it
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Back for an eye full of beauty!
What a way
To start my Friday!
Warm regards, Gus
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