My Gothic heart burning
in the sea of tears within.
Wrapped in thorny vines, dangling
by a thread from the surface.
The teary waves above in my eyes are
turbulent and the emotional winds lashing.
My Gothic fire, my tears of high emotion,
my crimson shine reddens this teary sea.
As if teary wax of blood seep
from the flames of my eyes!
Then they dry to a still on my face,
and all the haunting memories are visible.
My Gothic nature,
this forest that is my mind,
with skeleton-like trees,
pathless so any visitor
aimlessly drifts on within
my paradoxical juxtapositions.
My Gothic soul afire,
my eyelids snap open,
and my burning soul screams
through these blue eyes,
eyes where the tears now boil!
And in death the steam of my soul rises!
Rising, my darkly romantic soul does,
into the dark thunderclouds above,
where sunlight cannot penetrate,
so, below the storm, I burn in a teary sea.
Without beams of light from the heavens
to bathe me, I put my trust in the darkness!
Once more into the light of my darkness,
where the heavens and hell grasp hands,
in order for I, Daniel Long, to cross
between them at my own will,
to deliver my words,
prophetically!
And prophetic, indeed!
“Make anything you write
so goddamn prophetic!”
A fellow writer once told me.
And I follow that advice
through emotional flame and teary sea!










Powerfully penned, Daniel. This one packs a punch, with precise jabs of imagery, and knockout worthy wordplay my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian