When to Listen Lightly
Hey, listen I want to make
love with you
then write us some poetry ..
Which I need
so badly, to resonate both
gentle and softly
just like the hum of some
red hummingbird
or the buzz of a honey bee ..
And then I want it
to crack like a whip and be
heard loudly,
harsh and brutal, much like
a battlefield
might sound, with low sighs,
moaning and an
assortment of heavy breathing ..








I can feel the need to give and receive pleasure in this piece. Nicely done. Welcome to Stars Rite.
Bless you 😎👍
Passionately penned, Neville. Amazing write my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.
Damian
many thanks Damian 😎👍
I think You already know that I will already LOVE this one from the first lines,
“listen I want to make
love with you
then write us some poetry …”.
My kind cup of coffee! Love love love this one Neville my friend 💕
I had you in mind my friend .. thank you so very much and then some 💛⭐⭐👍
I had you in mind my friend .. thank you so very much and then some 💛⭐⭐👍