I wandered into this strange land
The beauty I have discovered
With no one to hold my hand
Only a bag and cloak to cover
I did not expect to find
A place to call my own
I moved space and time
Wanting to find a home
Then I met you
My world became so small
All my world views
Mean nothing to me at all
If I should leave
Would you take my hand
I can not see you without me
The truth is I want you and…
It is not the right time
In this world maybe the next
In my soul I know you’re mine
Reality tells me this is for the best
We never kissed
Or said words in the dark
I guess I can’t miss
Something we never start
I’ll have you in my dreams
That will do for now
On a bed of grass that is green
Goodbye to you just for now
so much longing beautiful Fia I feel you deeply ❤️makes me sad but I understand this…
Thank you Crimsin. Life is funny this way;))
Beautifully penned, Fia. Another excellent write my friend. Your words have a longing to them that gives this poem it’s wind. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
Hi
The line i guess I can’t miss something that never occurred. Nice thankful note to someone who loved you and cared for you losing everything.
I have seen one movie veer zhara of India and Pakistan lovers who couldn’t meet for years and they didn’t say like you said they adored each other and lived for each other.
For a person like you it seems you don’t need love or neither the person you just fulfil dam your desire and finish it off.
For a person like me lost hope on love andman thinking person like you who doesn’t dares and cowardly fears of few hounds that cheat for money
Atleast I gave you hope and to many when you sincerely love do it sincerely else you like a flower crushed by people evil desire that evil dead cant hurt you.
Jessy Jacob ❤️
I know you will get hurt but I cant ignore for few people who love sincerely and made their life heaven loving each other. My son must also not lose hope on someone he loves.
Sorry fia, my head has become few hounds trash throwing whatever they want and provoking me against me to get into trap. What can I say i believed one man till now now he lost interest in achieving his love which is true. He thinks he is not anymore good.
I am open to get blocked or delete my account i am not going to ask your pardon. This site seems suicidal home that inspires people to die instead of living seeing few hounds crap. I am not liking it anymore.
This poem is of love. There are those who love and just cannot be together. Whether it be due to distance or obligations. Not all obligations are nefarious. It could be due to taking care of their families due to being the only on to provide because of an illness.
I do not understand your hounds. I write what comes to mind and I do not expect everyone to like it. It is just my thoughts.
Very well written 👏
Thank you Liz;))
You know this kinda makes me think if Mark and I decided to just be pen pals.
All the missed kisses and keeping it safe. I didn’t take this as a death or suicide?
Sometimes we bury how we feel too because we don’t want to wreck our fantasies.
What if it gets ruined and it ends before it even begins!
Thank you Adel. That’s what I was hoping people see. Sometimes It’s just not the right time 🩷