it started as a whisper
soft warnings…
just at the edges of awareness
the way a storm builds
only a murmur in the distance
drifting on a slight breeze
but it grew…
from a tiny sound
barely audible…
to a full blown roar
leaving nothing behind
only total destruction…
no going back now
too broken to survive
no repairing what’s been destroyed
scatter the ashes and call it done
it’s time for complete reconstruction
a convergence
a revolution
Burn it down to build it back up stronger, more stable. I mean this gets the blood pumping with this one
When it’s done, it’s done. All we can do at that point is start over. And do it right. Thank you, Fia
Diggin the sentiment riding this vibe, Willow
Always heavy with your poetic messaging
Much respect
Naaj
I kinda burnt my filter to cinders. And some things need voice. I’ll do that. Thank you, Naaj
I just gave 2 weeks notice at my job this. I am pretty sure your poem is much deeper than that, but it is resonating pretty strong because of the job thing.
All the same, this is striking, and I want to again, and again, with a different mindset.
Powerfully penned, Willow. Another excellent write with a protest vibe my friend. This one has some really heavy layers throughout. Also I really, really, dig the title. Chef’s kiss! Amazing read as always my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
You know how I love me some word play and layers. Sometimes it doesn’t take a lot of words to say a lot. I’ve seen you do that time and time again. Thank you, my friend
I like that You seem to write in different styles, the voice in this one is loud like how a true revolution should be. It goes tiny then the momentum is built bit by bit until the moment of explosion happens. Great writing my friend.
I feel like we’ve been living on the set of a horror thriller the past couple years. A lot of us saw it coming but many didn’t pay attention until it was screaming in the streets. It’s too broken to survive now. Time to start over. Thank you, Light💕
Wow! This is good.
Thank you!
Amazing. Powerful work.
I can both see and feel exactly where you are coming from .. Very much enjoyed ma’am, very much indeed .. AGT’s .. Neville