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thoughtsdie wrote a new post
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Read MoreMy blood has no tasteUnless served on a steel plate Sharp enough to chisel fine wordsThat bring primal color to this dinner Paper on a platterI consume to later vomitAcids merged with indigestible flavors Sick poems no one desiresThese cravings...
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Powerfully penned, thoughtsdie. Amazing write with lots of layers my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I love this. Very powerful I can relate to this.
Thank you for sharing this.
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Atticus Abbey wrote a new post
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Read MoreI am the shadow that stains your tongue, a slow drip in midnight's corset undone— between your teeth like a psalmechoing from a cellar a corpse minuet before the razor parts the skinin my quasi alto begging for dawn...
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Hi
I see you write with heart, the art work that reveals your writing. You are multiple talented. I see in everything I do does it is really useful for me in my life frankly speaking does it make my bread. I only have a suggestion write more of positive themes, we never know our poem and pic monetise to a million dollar value. Keep writing.If you can inspire 10 people it’s equivalent to 10 times, because each one spreads to another 10 people.
Take my review as constructive feedback. Even though we are suffering with negative people around if we turn that into positive themes then our strength builds. Your tears must strengthen you, you must cry for best things, if we feel sad because people are hurting us then your strength diminishes, instead you come out from that and do better your energized double times.
Jessy Jacob ❤️
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Thank you. 98% of what I write is, fiction, no more or less. Shallow minds can take my words however they wish. I write for my own entertaiment.
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I would say even entertainment pays you best example is instagram shorts it’s gift for you, you are unknowingly unintentionally making bread. But I can relate to your writings becauseany people like me are facing what you write.
I am not mean but in a way making best use of our life. Mom doesn’t make best food so that she can bribe you to make homework when you were in school it’s her natural way to make you best so i just asked you to take it seriously and change few people life.
Nothing personal i said.
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People have the option of readng or not my words I don’t believe in censorship. If people have issues with my words, they should seek help. Once again I say, I write 98% fiction.
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Read MoreWe Need Each Other More than we need civilised society More than we need the free market economy We need each other More than we need crude oilMore than we need laser guided missiles More than we need presidents and premiersMore than we need...
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So true. We need each other. More than ever, we need each other.
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Thanks for reading.
Regards
James
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redzone posted in the group National Poetry Month
Poetry Day #10
I get so lost sometimes
watching as the world burns,
as centuries of Culture and
Heritage, human lives, are destroyed
for no reason other than who
will be number one among
the billions.Our world burns,
it cries for our help, our decision
to act and honor what remains
of humanity’s decency, to cast
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You write our thoughts so well, thank you.
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On so many levels this so the unblemished truth. And what isn’t burning is drowning. While a pocket of corrupt haves destroy everything for the have nots…and ultimately themselves
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definitely more… crap… this touched me more than you think
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Ooo, did it now. Nice;)
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I love it when you skip the conventional, and just flow like spilt honey all over the page, Fia – encore! x
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Thank you Hjx
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Great use of words and rhymes. Awesome job here.
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Thank you ..I appreciate that Vision;))
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A sensual poem, written with the precision of a master key. Or should I say: Mistress key!
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Haha, thank you M.E;))
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Passionately penned, Fia. A very seductive write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian 😊
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Oh damn! That’s some fierce wordplay there! You built that to perfection!
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Thank you Willow 😊
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Amazingly written.. I’m looking for more.. ☺️
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Haha thank you Christopher 😊
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