I am the shadow that stains your tongue,
a slow drip in midnight’s corset undone—
between your teeth like a psalm
echoing from a cellar a corpse minuet
before the razor parts the skin
in my quasi alto
begging for dawn as you eat crow
taking me for preamble of ghost
between the noose and your thighs
from a dry moat the devil you kiss
to taste your own damnation
while I hum the dirge you left unwritten
tasting my cigarette unamed
in the hollow of your throat
where the dark is swallowed
Hi
I see you write with heart, the art work that reveals your writing. You are multiple talented. I see in everything I do does it is really useful for me in my life frankly speaking does it make my bread. I only have a suggestion write more of positive themes, we never know our poem and pic monetise to a million dollar value. Keep writing.
If you can inspire 10 people it’s equivalent to 10 times, because each one spreads to another 10 people.
Take my review as constructive feedback. Even though we are suffering with negative people around if we turn that into positive themes then our strength builds. Your tears must strengthen you, you must cry for best things, if we feel sad because people are hurting us then your strength diminishes, instead you come out from that and do better your energized double times.
Jessy Jacob ❤️
Thank you. 98% of what I write is, fiction, no more or less. Shallow minds can take my words however they wish. I write for my own entertaiment.
I would say even entertainment pays you best example is instagram shorts it’s gift for you, you are unknowingly unintentionally making bread. But I can relate to your writings becauseany people like me are facing what you write.
I am not mean but in a way making best use of our life. Mom doesn’t make best food so that she can bribe you to make homework when you were in school it’s her natural way to make you best so i just asked you to take it seriously and change few people life.
Nothing personal i said.
People have the option of readng or not my words I don’t believe in censorship. If people have issues with my words, they should seek help. Once again I say, I write 98% fiction.