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thank you dearest Adagio ❤️
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You are very welcome.
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Such a heartfelt write that pulled at these old heartstrings my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian for feeling me so deeply ❤️
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Writing helps, remembering happy thoughts are healthy, suppressing afraid of darkened pain is a negative. Be healthy Lady and never forget, just don’t live in the pain
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thank you dearest Me I sometimes feel I felled him it is an overwhelming feeling ❤️
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twofiftythree posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
bi-trillets attempt. this one wasn’t easy for me…never do well when rhymin is involved.
endless night confession
breathe in the black smoke, love feels like a joke
the nights we wasted tasted strange
cheap liquor kiss, dirty exchangeyou were my worst itch, struck like a kill switch
old barroom lungs in borrowed light
we swore we’…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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A brilliant submittal, Syr Dru
Congratulations on another successfully excellent effort in displaying such admirable skill in the true essence and grasp of that which is conveyed in these earnestly shared teaching sessions.
Your poetic potential is second to none … this piece is spot-on in every sense of the phrase: meter, poetic voice, i…Read More
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I wonder if we are readin the same poem. I really expected this one to get marked up with a red pen on all the places I went wrong. I appreciate your input and the lessons you’re providin. I’ll agree with you on fixin the rhyme so I’ll add the s to pain. but you’re gonna have to pry my lowercase letters and lack of punctuation from my cold dead ha…Read More
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Ha-hahhhh!
That’s a given, M’Friend, but I’ll never give-up on ya. 🤓
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Bravo, Fia. You know how to tell a story my friend. This is really good, can’t wait to hear more. Take a bow!! Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian 😊 working on the next part
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Never hearing your voice before, Fia 👀👂
I did not know what to expect, but I can’t say I’m disappointed in any way … actually, I was quite taken with how smoothly soft ‘n sultry, creamy ‘n smooth it is, as though my mind was being caressed through my ears on a warm, gentle breeze by a hundred dandelion flowers.
I heard no reason for the “Adult” sticker … YET, anyway. Now, at least, I’m prepared for any sweetly naughty surprise one might hope for!. ; p
Anyone ever tell you you’re a VERY talented lady?
YEP! That’s my outlook! ⁓ Richard🖌-
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Thank you, Richard. I put the adult sticker because I figured I might as well start from the beginning. lol
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Hmmm?
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Working on it. Had a head cold. I Sound nasally
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Ohhh, NO, Fia!
Don’t tell me you normally sound like Betty Boop? 🙄
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Amazing! You’re a talent!
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Read MoreAs we entered the chamber there was crackling underfoot Squeaks and scampering, lots of squishing underfoot We retreated for a flamethrower and we needed more light We needed to identify what in the fuck was creating our plight As we...
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The visual to your writing is really good. I see the whole picture
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It’s an old piece, but we still like it. Thanks Lady
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Read MoreSeven bokors arrived at my cryptPainted face and in ceremonial dress, with chants rolling from their lipsThey had each read the signs and knew that I Is Me was overdueGoats and chickens were sacrificedto Baal to help bring the...
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Tere are so many things that humans keep bottled up, it’s so much better on paper. Thanks Lady
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What a lesson to be learned. I Like dark writes
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Ba’al, ancient Semitic title for a “lord” or “owner”, earthly concepts and aspirations that doom the vast majority of humanity to this fleshy, fluid realm. But are you not the lord & owner of yourself? Perhaps our flesh (and subsequent consciousness) is merely a vehicle for something incomprehensible beyond. Very interesting imagery and dark ideas to stew on. Good work.
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Within the matrix concept everything is programmed down to DNA. To be programmed there has to be coders or a coder that allows this program to run. While running there will be viruses, trojans, broken codes, and all types of bots with various names known by the flesh. Thanks dude
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This is so very touching, Brenda.