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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello beautiful Fia this is so passionate and painful I only hope it is fiction love can be cruel 💕
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, crimsin. Yes it is fiction. I am glad you felt something from this. xoxo
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Fia. Simply amazing write my friend, you changed it up a little on this one. Excellent! Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. I always want to try something new. Always appreciate your comments.
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![Profile picture of RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS]()
Awww, Fia =(
How poignantly vivid your pen has laid its sorrows’ disappointments upon our hearts … so many times we’ve gone through such relatably plaintive ache, yet, your poetic emotion expresses it all so vividly, as though it could be any one of us experiencing your own moments of disquiet.
“Love is a demon’s creation.
It obscures and twists the mind,
That being in complete submergence is good.”Oh, yes! Nothing’s like LOVE it when it’s good, when all is wine and roses; for, love shall seek not but for its own satisfaction. It will bend and twist you, and shine and dim upon you, while holding onto those within its grip. And, there is no single answer to the question of what love really is, but I have learned that when love is in control, there are no guarantees.
I so admire the smoothness and imagery with which you paint emotions, feeling, and thoughts upon the canvas our minds, hearts, and souls … the hallmarks of a true artist’s touch.
Swearing we’ll never fall in-love again, our needs are far too deep not to.
Beautiful work, Dear Poetess … thank you for sharing! ⁓ Richard🖌Superb artwork choice:
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“Excellent use of metaphor, too.”
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read MoreEverything’s going up in smoke tonight Temperature is rising from the fire below Speaking in curses to mask such delight While momentum has started to plateau Positive thinking can only lead one so far Losing ground to a pack of assorted lies On the face...
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damn good write
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Ambjr. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Alexandria]()
I know this was written in time passed, but I believe you’re saying you move to the beat of a different drum. I feel you, because so do I.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You’re spot on, I knew I had company. You’re very welcome, and thank you for commenting. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I like how things are pulled from Damian’s vault. This is good.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I thought all writers have a vault? Don’t tell me I missed another meeting. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This one took me somewhere…the smell of sulfur & the rising burn of hell beneath the feet. All I can say is, they spread their propaganda but nothing’s stopping us from spreading truth. Who knows what could happen when enough voices shout it? Your vault must be a gold mine, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Keen observation skills and a great sense of smell, you possess there. There is nothing stopping us from spreading the truth, it’s all I strive to do. My writing is so steeped in exposing the truth, even as a young writer, once I found my calling I knew it. So you can count me in. The vault has some good stuff in there, it also is the resting place for some not so good writes. In all honesty, I’m a hoarder I don’t even through my worst stuff away. Some have been known to be retooled and rereleased, others can’t be saved, but they tell my journey as a writer. I am also sentimental. I still have my first notebook of work, from when I was 15 years old. And it was terrible. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You nailed it. Good writing.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The gospel truth.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian.
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreI’m sittin herecontemplatinwhat the fuckwhat was the purpose of all thisthe months of shakin handsthe dry mouth bargainsthe empty glasses I stared downlike they owed me somethinwhat was the pointof holdin onif the fall still tastes like this?sweet kisses...
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello you two this is so passionate I love your combined voices 💕
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Hi, thank you, crimsin xoxo
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Passionately penned, Fia & Ambjr. This is an incredible collaboration you two, amazing storytelling. Appreciate you, both.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian ❤️
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Tremendous work. Both of you.
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Thank you so much Thomas 💓
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This is a hella dope collab!!!
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Thank you, Naajir😁
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Passionately penned, Fia. She wanted to get back to the dream, she didn’t have, but really did have. lol. Ignore me, I was being silly. You’re always incredible with your storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Haha, yeah, she wants to get back to him. Thank you Damian ☺️
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreI walk in the rain so my tears can blendBut these tears don't blendThey scream in pain with every red drop I walk in the rain to cool off my skinYou can see the steam rise as every drop hitsAnd...
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That’s really very good Fia.
I used to swim a lot so others couldn’t see my tears.
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Thank you, Peter;))
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Fia. This is an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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![Profile picture of RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS]()
I wonder, Dear Fia 🤔
How many poems of unrequited or flown love have been written by brokenhearted pens? One might as well attempt to count all the stars above. Thankfully, fresh love always comes along to dance into our ever-hopeful hearts and dreams.
Once again, your amazing knack of turning words into deepest feelings of emotional experiences, lure us into your intricately-woven poetic tapestry.
This one will hold-on for a long time … its touch I’ve known all too well to forget.
Thank you, Lady Fia, ever-so warmly! ⁓ Richard 🍂
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Thank you, Hj xoxo