Where Rivers Wander

Crimsin wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

little tree

Poetry

April 15, 2025

6

My thoughts worry I don't feel good todayMy nerves are on edge, and my soul feels rankledIt's a beautiful sunny day, and I can't get in tuneIt just makes my foul mood stark in comparisonAlcatraz, except my prison is...

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6 Comments
- NAAJIR
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Love this. Trees speak to my spirit as well. A reliable grounding force.
  I dug this vibe thru and thru. Thx for posting, Brenda
  It’s a good start for an ordinary Tuesday
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    hello dearest Naajir thank you for feeling me on this write yes trees with their stoic knowledge calm I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Powerful and poignant. Tremendous work.
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Thomas I appreciate your thoughts 💕
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Nature helps so much more with our issues then medicine or people trying to figure out our problems. I’ll see you in the woods my friend. Love this poem. xo
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Keith I love nature 💕
Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Fia's Frankenstein Experience

Poetry

April 14, 2025

11

This is my masterpieceI have poured my heart and soul into this I must hand this in The pounding in my chest will not cease Every metaphorEvery juxtapositionWas executed with A precise description She is going to hate it.That witch of...

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- Nick DC
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  I like the innocents to this. Great ink, friend.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Nick. It is hard to see your work handed back with red marks on it.
- Nick DC
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Haha, well that was most of my school life back in the days.
- Crimsin
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Fia you showed her you are a masterful writer to bad she didn’t encourage that probably jealousy 💕
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Brenda
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Tremendous work.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Thomas
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Fia. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Damian
- M.E
  3 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  I don’t know how I missed this one.
  Each line she “corrected” with her red pen will echo: It’s Alive, Fia. “)
  - Fia Naturie
    3 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, M.E
Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Every Single Night

Uncategorized

April 14, 2025

14

Simplicity can produce brilliance Sometimes less is more Reconnecting through resilience Sure seemed easier before Drop the beat ride the bass line Rhythm is raging hard Ladies sipping on foreign wine Melody is her calling card Guitars solo over...

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12 Comments
- S. Libellule
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Well done Damian… nice tight rhyme
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, LDF. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Bat Powers
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Tight ink Have a great day!!
  
  Bat
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Bat. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angel. So glad you enjoyed the write. Yes, sometimes the song is enough, and there’s not always need for all the pomp & circumstance. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- goldenmyst
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Damian here you have proved with great virtuosity that less is more. This is a tightly crafted poem that puts me in the scene. I could see the club with my very own visualization. Very well done.
  
  John
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Well said, beautifully penned.
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Glad you liked the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Curly Grace
  2 months, 1 week ago
  
  Tight, clean, and atmospheric. The groove comes through in the writing.
  - Damian DeadLove
    2 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, CG. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m glad the groove comes through, that was my intent. I hadn’t read this one in a while but it still holds true. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
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• 1 year, 2 months ago

Hello, if you are having any interruptions with posting, we are currently working on it. I am sorry for this.
Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Knife Kisses Bone

Uncategorized

April 11, 2025

6

Another opportunist for hire The cat with nine lives Constantly feeding on desire Somehow this rat thrives Cowards watch the slaughter Picks the bones find a gem Through shit infested water Without getting any on them Right place...

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6 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  When a knife kisses, bone is a powerful image. Nice poem.
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you liked the write my friend. It is a powerful image for sure. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- goldenmyst
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Damian, this is a dark pearl in the sea of poetry. You give your imagery power and grit that unfolds like a dark dream as I read. Truly grand read tonight.
  
  John
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for the support, it means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Well written my friend. Magnificent.
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Glad you liked the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
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