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Read MoreMidway through my life, I cannot go on. Middle of a winter storm, too blind to trek on. The struggle of having to embrace psychosis, has been very painful, rendering me blind. Blind and deaf to a world that rejected me, blind and deaf...
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Can feel the honesty and pain my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreThe morbid hue of death awaited uswhen I made that last promise to you.Vanity! I already sensed the vanity,that delicate moment when our trust lived. For the life of me, however, I don't know why.Why I let go, why I...
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I like how you ask for forgiveness . Nice Daniel. 😊
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Yeah. It felt great this morning writing this.
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. I could feel this one my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I am so sorry for your loss.
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thank you beautiful Fia he is fighting to live but the doctors say the prognosis is grim 💕
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Hey Brenda, I’m very sorry. You wrote what you needed to say. Courageous woman you are. Take care.
Daniel
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thank you Danie I appreciate you..I will be delving in delusion it’s how I cope 💕
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Wow, this hits home in a way that leaves me at a loss for words. I lost two uncles and a cousin to drug addiction, and I have a wife with a mental illness. Both get looked down on by society. Sorry to hear this, friend. My heart goes out to you.
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thank you dearest Nick I guess my only thoughts are why some people have to suffer so badly in this life he had such a sweet spirit and still does my heaviness won’t go I wish I could have saved him from the world my prayers for your family hugs Nick 💕
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When I pray I ask why the good ones suffer. Each time I have no answer. Hopefully there is peace beyond this world. 🤗
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❤️
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thank you beautiful Mary he is a fighter 💕
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thank you beautiful Mary hugs ❤️ so are you…
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Brenda, sending prayers and positive energy your way my friend. Powerfully penned. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian it’s in God’s hands now I appreciate the prayers hugs ❤️
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Brenda, this breaks my heart. 💔 I’m sending you hugs & prayers for your boy, your family & you. This line choked me up:
neither hispanic or white
My daughter is half Mexican & half German…neither fully accepted in either. She’s always said she has no place of belonging. Why does society do this to our babies? So many hugs, Brenda ❤️
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I am German also and my boy Mexican German as well…thank you sweet lady for the love here it’s deeply felt hugs on your daughters shared grief yes they are just kids really ❤️
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You are brave to write of all youve endured, I admire that, and Im not that brave, Ill admit
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Repent? You did it right. Delicious. Nice spill
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Thank you, Fia. Glad you like…
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So Meg this flows and is all around great poetry. Bravo!
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Glad you like it, Daniel. I like to go with the flow
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Intensely erotic flow hehe…
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Me too, Will. Thanks for reading!
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Ha! I bet so…
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That’s sweet, girl. I think Dragon liked the photos, though.
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I echo Adira. A delicious spill, it was!
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I’m so glad it makes you hungry, Pandy.
I’ve been meaning to ask you on a picnic…xoxo
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Read MoreExplaining to A Leaf~ loneliness ~With winds stalking me,leaves tremble at my approach,they are afraid of the coldthat follows:and, in hushed rustling whispers,they ask, as I pass,“Why is it you’re not afraid?”Un-answering, my feet march on,trodding on their fallen...
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I’m hugely impressed with your understanding of poetic element.
So, you are Richard the Rascal. Let me put that down. This is another amazing piece with emphasis on personification and symbolism. There’s obviously a metaphorical significance to the changing season, specifically fall to winter. It’s interesting to note that while you give leaves many characteristics of humans in this piece, they lack the unique capacity for understanding… at least, that’s the perspective of the speaker. Your final stanza is a fantastic summation.This is top shelf material, Richard.
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Graciously spake, Dear Poetess🥂
Your coaxing words are sweet as honeysuckle to a hopeful bard’s susceptible ear … most especially, from one so poetically accomplished and sophisticated as yourself.
A few devices I tend to favor are color, texture, analogy, simile, and nature … I’m so pleased you’ve recognized their presence in this rather poignant little piece.Thank you ever-so warmly, Lady DK, for your always welcomed accolades! ⁓ Richard the Rascal🖌
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Hi, M’Good Friend! ✌🏼
How great it is, Tim, to be greeted here with one of your appreciatively expressed and inspiringly encouraging reviews, that always seems to grasp my poetry’s core essence.
Yes, like You, I tend to enjoy a good dose of metaphoric imagery in my pieces.Thank you, Syr, for enjoying this rather sad Free Verse piece! ⁓ Rascal🖌
PS: On your recommendation, I had to check the site out … do you know how one edits their poetry?
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Thanks, Buddy👌
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Graciously spake, Dear Poetess🥂
Your coaxing words are sweet as honeysuckle to a hopeful bard’s susceptible ear … most especially, from one so poetically accomplished and sophisticated as yourself.
A few devices I tend to favor are color, texture, analogy, simile, and nature … I’m so pleased you’ve recognized their presence in this rather poignant little piece.Thank you ever-so warmly, Lady DK, for your always welcomed accolades! ⁓ Richard the Rascal🖌
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These poems are so damn dark and unsettling. GREAT!