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Read MoreI knew it was over… the day your hand lay lifeless in mine. That sudden goodbye and that iciness you shared. Glares… not beautiful gazes. Sharing hands with a corpse then made it a wintry day. It was a shimmering...
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Your poem is so beautiful and sad, Daniel!
‘Sharing hands with a corpse’. This speaks volumes, and cuts like a knife. As always, your work is beautifully written with a masterful use of imagery, brilliant!-
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Ja, ich schreibe wunderschön mit einer meisterhaften Verwendung von Bildern, Elke. Ich denke gerne, dass meine Arbeit brillant ist, aber ich weiß noch nicht, ob ich ein Meisterautor bin. Nächstes Jahr werde ich einen fertigen Roman haben und ich bin nervös. Hahahaha!
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Read MoreThat teardrop shape of my light! A glow with many shadows cast. The vaulted heavens above catch the long thread of smoke rising when my candle flame’s pinched. My smoke pools and condenses as my blackened wick cools. The teary streams of wax dry and my tears...
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Love the layers and imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreDon't try thinking about who you were. Don't try thinking about who you are. Don't try thinking about who you will be. None of those versions of yourself were fixed,are fixed or ever will be fixed. And by the time you finish reading...
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There’s always new beginnings, always new lessons. The body is resilient and ever changing. I notice that when I gain weight. lol
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hello dearest Benny this is brilliant I am a different kind of personality and I can testify the person I was is not who I am this is really great 💕
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Thank you
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This is so deep. You have a way of making people think.
I am ever-changing, but I still remain true to who I am.-
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Thanks Alexandria for your lovely comments.
Sometimes I think my words sound a bit preachy but they are never meant to be.
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They don’t sound preachy at all. You have a gift.
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Read MoreI love you… You don't love me… You will never love me… You will never love me again… And again I hold your pictures… And again I dream of the old times… When our hands shared the other tenderly… When our lips were thawed of that...
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tim and
goldenmyst are now friends
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Can feel the weight of this write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian