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Read MoreLoves out of order.Imagined fear/terror.Necessary mental response.Collapse of reason and logic.Rise of despair.Sense of hopelessness.What is sleep?Mind always whirring.Suicidal ideation.Nothing but suffering.A smile from a stranger.A speck of light.A lovely thought.Black turns to grey.Grey turns to beige.Some reason returns.The...
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The first one is better in my opinion. Our minds are a battlefield.
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Read MoreForget how to love and learn how to hate. That's my advice for young, audacious writers. Learn to embrace who you really are. Forget the facades that are flattery. Forget gregariousness and learn when to be silent. Forget bullshitting and learn not...
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Sound advice my friend, lots of truths in this write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This is sound advice, and I’m pretty sure someone would have needed that.
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Thank you, Adira! Writing this made me feel much like an old wise man… lmao. And I hope I can benefit from it as well and write more inspirational pieces!
Daniel
Gothic-Surrealist
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Read Morereckless understanding, I love painfinding pinpoints of nerves and applying pressureit helps me focus on the deeper things the world spins and I realize I am a part of the mother... Earthevery fiber of my being feels my sibling's painas...
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Every one of us has the power to heal & to harm within us. It’s which course we choose to follow that separates the healers from the rest. Beautiful, Brenda 🧡
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hello lovely Willow this is true it is always my intent to make things nicer it doesn’t always go that way no matter what sometimes thank you for the love on this 💕
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Even with faith we will still struggle. I guess pain is a part of life when it comes. For many, faith has its benefits and joys. For others it’s a fantasy made up by humans. I suppose our minds and how we think plays a big part.
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my faith perhaps is not as strong as others though I do know God I struggle with suffering thank you for your thoughts 💕
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Great write Brenda.
I now realise that pain is quite different from suffering.Most, if not all, our suffering arises in the mind…..
that’s also where peace hangs out.
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hello dearest Benny my mind cause me to hurt with the way I perceive the world… I watch the news and ache with the pain of my brothers and sisters…there is an unrest in me that doesn’t understand such mind scarring events what is the nature of that? thank you for listening 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I deeply appreciate you 💕
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hello lovely Mary good evening thank you beautiful lady most graciously for being so kind 💕
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Read MoreTwo toddlers wore rain In the yard, in the fogof a heavy downpour,two toddlers wore the rainlike tight-fitted jeans, which clung to them so soggy, and yet in moments of gleewith a spin and a spree they giggled and laughed,a thousand thuds, as each...
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Phenomenally penned, Tim. Another fantastic collection my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Tim I wonder besides rain what these poems have in them that weave them together there is something ominous I can sense… great write 💕
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Superb flow.
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Ahhh! 🌧
What could be better, My Good Friend Tim, than a captivating soliloquy of imaginative Free Verse poetry from the rainbow of your dancing pen, creatively presenting the wonders of “Rain” to fill and soothe our parched imaginations.
Nice rhymes ‘n imagery in Poem 1, and your artwork choice sets the perfect mood.
I enjoyed each offering … particularly:“For an hour, the sky recites
poems from heaven
and I listen…mesmerized.”Outside my window, rain’s forecast today … I’m keeping my best umbrella and shiny red boots handy!
Good stuff, Syr Poet … much enjoyed, as usual! ⁓ Rascal🖌150/100
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Haha, shiny red boots? Thank you Richard, your comments are always entertaining and interesting. It’s always good to know there’s a master of poetry around. 🙂
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Quite a collection, Sir Tim.
Especially the woman in the window piece. Yet, the beginning obviously draws the reader in, with the vivid imagery. Well stocked stack of art, this.
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Thank you Styx. It’s good to see you to. 🙂
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This is an interesting piece starting off one way and flipping it around. That is how life is, right?