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hello dearest Styxian good evening I’m happy the language of this write spoke to you it was how it presented itself the poem I mean thank you so much for letting me know ❤️
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Hey crimson!
The last line is a dark but beautiful visual. It gives me a Celtic vibe.
It starts off with wonderful bits of love then changes tone.
I love the word pairing of sweeping crimson. It’s like a red wave of devotion.Love your stuff chica:)
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hello beautiful Adelphina good morning thank you graciously for such a lovely comment❤️
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hello lovely poetess thank you graciously ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good evening thank you graciously my friend ❤️
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Read MoreIt was red wine streams which flowed me to their grave I only wished to tell them how much I missed them, but there was something in the Welsh air, which stopped my lips from moving The closest bar was a lifetime away, who told the barmaid...
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You’re on a tear lately, Rob. Which is good for us as your audience!
You sir are truly a poet. Even if you scoff at such titles. LOL.
I love where this write took me, in my own visuals. just enough detail to create a scene, for us to be bystanders to with our own eyes in our brains.
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Daniel Long and
Jacob erin-cilberto are now friends
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Read MoreLook, folks, nobody knows hyperbole better than me—believe me. People are always telling me, “Sir, you’re the greatest ever. In history. Maybe ever.” And it’s true! I know words, I have the best words. Some people might even say...
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Oh, it is all so true! In some universe somewhere inside his head, maybe. I think the people in there will deal with him in a very harsh way. Can’t you see the signs? He is slipping away — just not fast enough.
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Read MoreSaturday's sunset cracked the pavements of my skin, I only flirted with the waitress to keep my mouth moving Becoming mute was just a covenant between redemption, forgiveness and the snow – shuffling into dark clouds - waiting to fall backwards The rainshiver smells of Thursday dreaming of...
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Your ability as a writer always makes me interested in reading what you offer today. This is mainly why I find a site to frequent. Not for my own accolades, but to be energized by others’ writes. You do that, consistently. Bravo
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And this is why I am so pleased I returned to the keyboard a decade ago. I was chatting to our great friend Honoria earlier and I’d love for us all to meet under U.S of A skies.
p.s. I will have British marines as bodyguards, for some insecure Yanks hate me. Lol. It’s always a pleasure my friend
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it’s always the insecure ones that hate. LOL
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Hello Crims!
I like the old-timey vibe of this. I wish there was more along this type actually. It just seems to set a nice tone when reading. Like those before us perhaps. At any rate, this is a wonderful poem that you’ve presented for us.