oh wow beautiful Indie this hurts…I have such illusions and I still hold onto them even when proven wrong by others hugs great write ❤️

That ending is like a gut punch. Lovely write.

I remember writing once “images of you and me never equal any semblance of we.” This caught my breath and took me back to that moment. I agree with Fia, those last lines are powerful and painful.

“OUCH”. Agree with those above, it is a very powerful write and painful to read and know it happens far too often. -Curt

Powerfully penned, Indie. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. That ending was painful indeed. Appreciate you.

Damian

Traumatic
Hard to recognize when they sell you out.

Keep punching Indie ..

The pain of knowing betrayal. It’s shattering. Thank you for sharing your poem.

I like steak well done, but the current steak situation…inedible, unpalatable and unacceptable. Perfectly executed

I agree with Willow. Well done meat but our current situation is beyond repair. Nice work!

We as a nation have had tough times in the past, but I can totally understand your sentiments. Everyone is getting on the same wavelength. We all know things aren’t going good. There are many factors involved to.

Well said!

For a moment we was like this is a fed up person, then this person has been flocked, nothing but sheep. Tight

I smell a Pavlovian steak!! Well done, Fia! “)

Mic drop, Cuz!