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Read MoreAuthor’s Note:Inspired by “The Call To Adventure”, by JoshBond. To me, the underlying message is to do freedom responsibly. For me, this involves a mindfulness of both the internal and the external. In this poem, Josh incorporates subtle, irregular...
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NAVINA posted in the group National Poetry Month
THE STORM’S EYES
Tornado you seek
The darkness
I feel weak ..
The skies in complete blackness
Your power I’ll see all week.Clouds move like spilled ink
On a grey canvas
That I left to streak
Brushing with slugs
As an artist, you can’t peek.My art smears as the storm claims
Bold dark colors
Watch how it fades
I’m happy…Read More![]()
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The last line lands in a way that makes you want to reread this again, and let it linger. This caught my breath.
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hello dearest Brandon good morning thank you graciously I’m happy you like it ❤️
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This reads almost like an invocation, a chant of summoning. Much enjoyed this. As Brandon said, it invites rereading 🧡
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hello beautiful Willow thank you lovely one I appreciate you thoughts these just uncurrents of feeling rising ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with dark undertones my friend. I concur with Willow and Brandon. Amazing read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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Read MoreIn a hotel room far from herethere was a perfect version of you and mewe ate instant noodlesand looked out at the purple winter skyline You let me talk and talk and talk and for one night I was free...
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oh wow beautiful Indie this hurts…I have such illusions and I still hold onto them even when proven wrong by others hugs great write ❤️
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Thank you so much, Bren ❤️
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That ending is like a gut punch. Lovely write.
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Thank you Fia 🙂
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I remember writing once “images of you and me never equal any semblance of we.” This caught my breath and took me back to that moment. I agree with Fia, those last lines are powerful and painful.
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Thank you so much Willow. It’s not a good way to feel at all.
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“OUCH”. Agree with those above, it is a very powerful write and painful to read and know it happens far too often. -Curt
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Thank you Curt 🙂
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Powerfully penned, Indie. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. That ending was painful indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian, appreciate it 🙂
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Traumatic
Hard to recognize when they sell you out.Keep punching Indie ..
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Thank you xx
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The pain of knowing betrayal. It’s shattering. Thank you for sharing your poem.
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You had a full poem and you broke it up to have omitted pieces. Interesting concept