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Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 11 months ago

Death is Calling

Poetry, Uncategorized

October 17, 2025

21

The sun rose with a sweet scentMy death is callingYou cannot cheat deathThree lines down an arm proves it The moon runsAs the candy corn colored sky emergesEscape is not an optionThe knives have been sharpened I am not the first...

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21 Comments
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  11 months ago
  
  Powerful stuff Fia
  - Fia Naturie
    11 months ago
    
    Thank you,Peter;))
- Thomas W. Case
  11 months ago
  
  Fantastic work. Powerful writing.
  - Fia Naturie
    11 months ago
    
    Thank you, Thomas;))
- Jim Musics
  11 months ago
  
  Heartfelt in a new way
  - Fia Naturie
    11 months ago
    
    Thank you, Jim;))
- Drieks
  11 months ago
  
  “The liver
  The spleen
  Rip out the intestines
  Making me his queen”
  
  Amazing writing Fia.
  - Fia Naturie
    11 months ago
    
    Thank you, Drieks
- Tim
  11 months ago
  
  Nice and dark Fia. I love the candy corn colored sky emerges line.
  Death takes its bride one organ at a time. Sounds like horror to me and a good one for the halloween season. 🙂
  - Fia Naturie
    11 months ago
    
    Thank you, Tim. I had fun doing this one. The candy corn was a nice touch. Did a challenge with Twofiftythree. We had to write gore, and you have to add candy corn
- Damian DeadLove
  11 months ago
  
  Hauntingly penned, Fia. Look at you writing horror, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    11 months ago
    
    I am trying. I’m a complete chicken. Love vampires, werewolves etc….
    Thank you, Damian;))
- Benjamin Scraps
  11 months ago
  
  Violent imagery & language apropos for an October horror film marathon. I’ve got some catching up to do, fer sure. Thanks for holding it down here at Stars Rite. Much appreciated!
  - Fia Naturie
    11 months ago
    
    There are a lot of writers getting in the spirit of it.
    Thank you, Benjamin
- Sappho (Elke)
  11 months ago
  
  Honest, morbid and great wording. A gorgeous piece, dear Fia!
  - Fia Naturie
    11 months ago
    
    Thank you so much, Sappho
- Knight
  10 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  It builds with a violent intensity.
  Very apt for Halloween. But also death is always with us. All year round. You poem is very truthful.
  Regards James
  - Fia Naturie
    10 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Knight 🩷
- goldenmyst
  10 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Your reflections on this conversation with death are the stuff of great poetry. Your poem is deeply felt and strong in imagery that is as poetic as it is strong. Truly a great poem.
  
  John
  - Fia Naturie
    10 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, John 🩷
- Crimsin
  10 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  hello beautiful Fia powerful dark here but empowering too ❤️
Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 11 months ago

Narratophilia

Erotica, Poetry

October 17, 2025

10

Speak to meWords insight and exciteSpeak to meCradle me in actionSpeak to meTell me the nuance of your touchSpeak to meI overflow in anticipationSpeak to meLet it be rough and rawSpeak to metake me in the dark so I...

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10 Comments
- Adelphina
  11 months ago
  
  Ooohhh. This is good!
  Loved take me in the dark so I can see the light
  Enjoyed the snapshot lines.
  - Fia Naturie
    11 months ago
    
    Thank you so much, Adel. It was fun.
- Damian DeadLove
  11 months ago
  
  Passionately penned, Fia. This write was fire my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    10 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Damian,))
- Styxian
  10 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  I feel that this is a calling out that we al can relate to, and be enthralled by. it’s an all consuming request that is determined and also inviting too. Like “give me that and I’ll give you this” type of trade. We write with emotions, so perhaps we look for emotions in return. Yeah?
  Cool write, Fia.
  - Fia Naturie
    10 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thank you Styxian;))
- goldenmyst
  10 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Fia, I could feel the entreaty of the woman as she beseeched her lover to give her words. I do agree the right words can make for a magical night in our out of bed. This poem speaks to me in a way that I could feel. Very well done.
  
  John
  - Fia Naturie
    10 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, John;))
- RPM
  10 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Oh yes! Tell me more…more…more!
  - Fia Naturie
    10 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Ooo, RPM. (Smiling)
Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 11 months ago

How Do You Sleep At Night?

Poetry

October 17, 2025

26

Been peddling cruel dreams Kerosene lies forged in hate Nothing is ever as it seems When logic's robbed of weight Still holding onto an illusion Drifting further from reality Ain’t no calm in mass confusion Useful idiots prefer brutality Upside down heading off-road This house of cards is...

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24 Comments
- twofiftythree
  11 months ago
  
  “useful idiots prefer brutality” killer fuckin line. excellent write.
  - Damian DeadLove
    11 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, twofiftythree. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I love that line as well, great minds think alike. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- S. Libellule
  11 months ago
  
  So relatable… nicely done
  - Damian DeadLove
    11 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, S. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Damian DeadLove
  11 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I want music for this one. Currently I’m working on a song called, “Novocain.” The words are posted here on the site. I got the music laid out, got the growls recorded, trying to get a good vocal take on the verses and bridge. Which requires me to sing. lol. Glad to see you back! Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Sappho (Elke)
  11 months ago
  
  Brilliantly written socially critical text, dear Damien! You will definitely make a killer song out of it!
  - Damian DeadLove
    11 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Tim
  11 months ago
  
  This is by far one of your best poems, Damian. Every stanza kicks ass. I like the Lennon reference and where you went with it. Great one!
  - Damian DeadLove
    11 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I knew somebody would get the Lennon reference. It’s one of my favorites writes as well, I knew I had something once I penned the first verse. Sometimes a writer just knows.. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Styxian
  11 months ago
  
  Well this is strong! Like flexing on a page. It’s tight with its rhymes and meter, like a pro boxer hitting us with a thesaurus!
  (damn, that’s a clever description, huh! LOL)
  Powerful write, Damian. Golden gloves…
  - Damian DeadLove
    11 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Really cool commentary brother, your continued support means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Damian DeadLove
  11 months ago
  
  Thanks, Mary. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Nick DC
  11 months ago
  
  Some people have no soul. The sad part is they thrive in their own filth. Great ink friend.
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Dude, I totally agree. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  10 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Enjoyed this poem immensely. From the rhymes, to the flow to the powerful message. Outstanding job Damian.
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Hey brother, thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Neville
  10 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Thoroughly enjoyed from end to end .. No kiddin, write on brother .. Neville 😎👍
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Thomas W. Case
  10 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Fantastic work.
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- goldenmyst
  10 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  This is strong as straight vodka on the morning after the Bolshevik revolution in Russia. Very strong my friend. Truly a power tonic in this age of authoritarianism in America. You hit the bullseye. You are a master at writing song lyrics that rock my soul.
  
  John
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. It is a sad state of affairs these days. Like witnessing a train wreck playing out and being strapped inside the lavatory of that locomotive. Thank you for your support my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Willow
  10 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  You know, there are times I wish you weren’t so nail on the head accurate. But these are dark days we’re entered into. Best to look them square in the eye. Brilliantly penned, my friend. Into the list it goes, as you say!
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Gotta look them square in the eye, make them flinch first. Always enjoy your commentary my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
Adelphina wrote a new post

• 11 months ago

Bleeding Blood

Horror, Poetry

October 14, 2025

17

Upon the sharpest Hook moon of fright Answering the call Of a newborn nightSummoning inside this Rusted metal shed Surrounded by misted Red air of dread Remnants of lovers From who I...

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17 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  11 months ago
  
  Yes..vampires, werewolves and the goes bump on hollioween..
  This has a great A-B flow to it. Nicely done
- Adelphina
  11 months ago
  
  Thanks Fia! I wanted it to sound almost like a lullaby. lol
- Styxian
  11 months ago
  
  Hello, can I interest you in a Frankenstein type guy? LOL.
  I love when you get all voracious! This is a dare ya write, you know!
  Okay okay. Enchanting write, Vampira! I love the aggressiveness of it, the baring of fangs and display of an appetite for human consumption…
  It’s super well done and well timed for the coming season. Perfecto!
- Adelphina
  11 months ago
  
  I was in the mood after reading all the fun stuff
  And you are just my type mister. Perfect. 😍
  I’m glad I enchanted you with my fangs!
  Next time I see you I’ll bite!
- Damian DeadLove
  11 months ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Adel. Excellent Halloween write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Adelphina
    11 months ago
    
    Thank you Damien!
    I enjoy fantasy horror.
    I love Van Helsing! The one with Hugh Jackman.
    And The Mummy with Brendon Fraser.
    
    Thanks for checking this out amigo!
- Tim
  11 months ago
  
  Nice and spooky for the Halloween season. 🙂
  - Adelphina
    11 months ago
    
    Tis the season Tim!
    Now I need a huge bag of Snickers and Twix! Hahaha
    
    Later gator!
- Neville
  11 months ago
  
  Even though I am not a huge fan of Halloween, this is pretty cool .. in fact it’s bloody much better than that .. Neville 🐈‍⬛🖤🐧😎👍
  - Adelphina
    11 months ago
    
    Nev, amigo!
    When I think of Halloween I remember getting on the tailgate of my dad’s truck with my friends to go trick or treating.
    Some of my best memories. We would do each other’s makeup and have a blast. lol
    There are a few neighborhoods in my hometown that still go all. People will park a block away and walk with their kids up and down the neighborhood.
    
    I’m glad you enjoyed the write! Now go take advantage of all the awesome chocolate varieties on Halloween 🎃
    Snickers & Twix! Even the Reese’s peanut butter cups are cool:)
    - Neville
      11 months ago
      
      You can beat an egg and a drum but you can’t beat a Twix can ya eh’ 😎👍
- Atticus Abbey
  11 months ago
  
  Oh! This is good.
  - Adelphina
    11 months ago
    
    Thank you!
    I wanted it to sound like a dark tale from Disney. lol
    Hope that made sense!
- Nick DC
  11 months ago
  
  Tis the season for the undead. Great ink.
  - Adelphina
    10 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thank you! It was fun to write!
- FlatDaddy
  10 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  An interesting write, suitable for the season.
  - Adelphina
    10 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Well hello there Mr. FlatDaddy!
    
    I wrote this around three years ago. I was in a vampy witchy mood. lol
    Thanks for stopping by amigo!
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