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Read Moreassasin of faith quiet your gunslong out of need war has begunseething design a future of naughtexplain yourself in the brightnessof exploding nuculear energyweapons of mass destructionman devolves time hiccupsdestiny halts takes a deep breathand proceedes forwardsorrow invades where...
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thank you beautiful Fia we are in this together and I really feel their pain on my body I think many of us do 💕
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An eyeopening poem to the horrors and effects of wars. Well written!
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hi dearest Me good afternoon we carry the weight of it all of us whether we realize it or not thank you for the love on this 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Into the book it belongs! So true my friend, you nailed the vibe. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I don’t usually like to write about this but it’s on my mind and it occurred to me we carry the weight of it on our bodies I appreciate you 💕
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Yes, my friend. I feel it too.
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thank you Detritus yes it is a heavy burden 💕
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreOnce Upon a Midnight sky A rendezvous between you and I A secret plan that was never to be told Was let out and all the others now know I wear his mark that he had given me Your eyes show there is no...
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A poem with a tinge of Poe! Well done, Fia! “)
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Thank you, M.E I love Poe.;))
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a very haunting write lovely Fia 💕
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Thank you, crimsin;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Love the, Poe vibes, my friend. Fantastic write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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There was a wicked man
who had a wicked cock…But I’m a wicked girl
who wants to rock your world-
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You already do.xoxo
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Nice rhythm ‘n flow, Fia 🎶
With a Poe-esque like ambiience, you’ve creatively darkened the page with both spot-on and soft rhymes, spilt blood-shivering imagery … ever-so pleasing to the poet’s ear and mind’s-eye.
Your perfect title and artwork choices set the stage well for what’s to come, and that classic intro couplet surely awakens even the most passive reader’s interest.
“Once Upon a Midnight sky
A rendezvous between you and I”Good stuff, Lady-Poet …
you’re such a pleasure to share with! ⁓ Rascal🖌-
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Thank you, and it is a pleasure to have you interpret my writing. I am still a student to poetry and I am learning from all of you. Thank you, Rascal
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You make sharing poetry a sparkling joy, Fia ✨
We’re all students, who can always improve and never learn it all.
You’re well on your way to mastery … keep faithful to your passionate goals and dedicated to listening with an open eye and willing mind.If you should ever seek a tutor! ⁓ Richard 👍
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Sam Nash wrote a new post
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Read MoreDo you think I can make you wetIf I swirl my fingersinside harder fasterI bet.Do you think I can make you screammy name If my tongue swirls insideand drinksyour cream.Do you think I can make them redeven more with a flick of a tongue or a bite for blood to shed.Do you think I...
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Yes, I think you are right. She’s scared of you. Woo. Nice poem
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yes im scary … that is why you are running too…
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Each line reads like throes of little death. Well penned!
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Thank you for your support… appreciate it
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Mmmm…. Ok I’ll shut up and get to work… can you survive that?
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Powerfully penned, Sam. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you my friend
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I’ve been thinking about you all night.
I’m tired of thinking.
Get busy-
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I was busy… if I tell you you won’t believe me
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Don’t you know that I believe everything you say
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wow dearest Sam this is evocative and dangerous 💕
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evocative ?… yes…. dangerous ??? … no… well, maybe… only for those who moan… but thank you for reading and commenting dear Crimsin
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you made me smile 😊
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Sam Nash wrote a new post
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Read MoreCan she be much colder than his?!?! I've given this woman more than she deserves. She's nothing without me. She can at least show me some respect when I fuck her. Maybe act like she was enjoying herself. I...
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Cipher wrote a new post
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Read MoreDrawn to places of stars, drawing me – Further afar.Pathways dotted with deer Knowing I Have no fear in the gnosis of My going. Breeze whispering dawn. Venus – Pulsating in The horizon – Over movements of trees. Song Swaying like the seas of the seasonsHaving arrays of reasons in their ways. Where I talk the walk of The...
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Beautifully penned, Cipher. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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crimsin this is good and true. You can feel this, like a ripple effect in the human psyche.