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    void

    inside the silence weep for days undoneweep bitter tears for the covetdie a little for the touch I never hadkeen within the melancholy blueDecember romance, fate doesn't allowsummertime need isn't givendesire urges me furtherpassion to unfurl my darknessit is...

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    • Sorrowfully beautiful. Truly artistry in language that flows all the way until the end. You have a talent with words that is exquisite even in its sorrow. Fine art here, my friend.

      John

      • hello dearest John bittersweet is love in my view thank you for the love on this ❤️

    • Never got to read your writing….just couldn’t get past the image of that stunning woman you provided….lol

      • hello dearest Benny yes she is stunning I was looking for a more mature woman to go with the poem thank you for your response I spend a lot of time for the right images ❤️

    • Lovely, Brenda. Better to let go sometimes. Lovely!

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    Time

    You think I don't care I care too much You think I'm not here I'm here in the cuts When you reach out your hand I took it in mine I don't understand Why can't I take some time I won't be gone long I doubt you’ll even...

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    Wicked Woman

    somethin’ bout the way she movessubtle yet so attractivethe innocent way her body groovesshe’s a hurricane burning radioactiveseductive eyes that mystifymakes you wanna fucking danceshe’s the spider, yeah you’re the flycaught up in a web of circumstance… don’t turn your...

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    • That’s one helluva wicked woman you just poemed Damian .. way to go my friend .. if you would kindly send me her coordinates I will stop by and convey my regards .. Neville

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. That she was, her coordinates were lost in the late 90’s. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I love this, Damian. It reminds me of “Witchy Woman” by the Eagles. 🌾🕊️

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. That’s high praise, and good company. What a lovely comment. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I wish I could hear the music behind it. Perhaps someday we’ll get a glimpse of your energy and fire within your lyrics. Good one, Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Well through GarageBand and Logic Pro, I’m working on that. lol. The problem with not being able to play an instrument, is that it only leaves a few options. So I’m working on a solo album to give these old lyrics a home, there will be new lyrics as well. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I sincerely hope this one makes the album cut! I so badly wanna hear it! It moves like a snake, undulates down the page. Perfect for the lyrics, my friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with lyrics my friend. I plan on this one making the cut, I’ve always wanted “Wicked” to have music again. It had music in 97, but it was never recorded. Thanks for your continued support it means a lot to me. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • This is fire, friend. Everyone loves a wicked woman.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That’s the theory.. Appreciate you.

        Damian

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I can hear this playing in some club… maybe even a strip club!? LOL
      It has a great beat to the lines. It’s also very entertaining! Awesome job Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I try, I always write to the beat in my head. Maybe a strip club, or some other place where human beings gather. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Killer piece dude. You’re a talent my friend.

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    red

    entertaining madness I weep in the maelstormhazardous need inviting meto wet my feet in the pool of turmoilthere are emotional sharks swimming in the currentsmy soul senses the dangerbut I don't stopI'm swimming in over my depthspassion drowns meand...

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    • What depravity does the rip tide take you to..

      This is a good write which understands the power of lust.
      😜

      • hello dearest Benny good evening thank you graciously ❤️have a great night…

    • Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • hello dearest Damian it’s so good to see you I thought we lost you thank you graciously❤️

    • Lust is a beast! You wove this one with a silken hand, Brenda. That ending was about dead on perfect 🧡

    • Crimsin, this is fantastic! You weave this emotional tour de force into a poem of great seductiveness. You make an emotionally sensual poem of the highest order here. I could feel the rip tide through you words. And the ending couldn’t have been better. Truly a resolution to surpass them all. Loved this all the way.

      John

      • hello dearest John good evening I am blushing from your beautiful comment thank you graciously ❤️

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