Powerfully penned, Benjamin. This is an excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

This caught my eye the most and I could not shake it. Looking for the higher power and as you look its like a rush of happiness. very interesting piece of work
“my energy burns
in the demiurge Sun,
turning the worm
as bird songs die
on a dopamine high”

This vibe hits hard with some heavy, cryptic and foreboding tones.
Straight diggin this!!

Much respect

Naaj

Powerfully penned, Nick. Brutally honest write my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.

Damian

I like how in the first stanza, you start out hazy and that no cares, then the next you explain the addiction and how everyone should relate in one form or another, because there are so many different addictions. Then you come back at the end and want to know who your true friends are.
You lead the reader of this very nicely. Good write Nick;))

Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Warm sexy and intimate…..a smooth elixir no doubt

Much respect

Naaj

This is a wonderful, intimate and tender poem , dear Crimsin! The imagery is amazing and cleverly chosen!

Lovely Brenda. This is delicate and heartwarming. Hope you had a great holiday my friend..xo

…an oasis of dreams. Fantastic, Brenda!

Sensual, symbolic, and steeped in metaphor—this feels like desire rendered as prayer.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. A very introspective write my friend. Thanks so much for sharing. Appreciate you.

Damian

Cleverly penned, K. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello Broken One this made me sad…I was thinking earlier that I go along thinking I’m kind until I look at my relationships and realize how mean I can be and I do feel guilty thought provoking write ❤️

You got it. These two poems are a pair even though they’re about 5 years apart. It just took that long…
Thanks for reading it!
❤️k