The world is an Orphan’s broken toy. Now that is a line, Thomas

We all want to be healed. That is the truest thing I’ve read today

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write, I relate to this one and concur my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you, my friend

This is great, the last lines are cutting and real.
Stinging also.
Kind Regards
James

That is the truth my friend. Totally accurate. Great description. To the point.

These days time is going fast…. so fast. I also wonder about the past years where did they go… It’s when the body starts to fail the one stats feeling old, but truth the soul never gets “old” but more wiser, brighter… There is a part of me which doesn’t grow up no matter how many years pass, I don’t know if it’s good or bad in this world, but it’s just me being me. I should check out your channel soon. Wishing You only peace and warmth in your days🤍

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend and so spot on. You’ve captured the aging process perfectly. Appreciate you.

Damian

I recently said to someone that I don’t recall ever being offered the extended warranty, but I’m not much impressed with the limited warranty. When it goes, so does everything else. You’re right, it doesn’t move slowly

Thank you, Willow.

I enjoyed this ink

Bat

Poignant to the point of poetic perfection Thomas .. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍👍

This has a immense warmth to it.
Much enjoyed.
regards
james

Hi Thomas.
I completely agree with Nev.
I also liked how you specified 12 years old.
Gave perspective to the reader.

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend, this one pulled at these old heartstrings of mine. Amazing work. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hello Thomas. Your writing pulls me in every time. As though I’m standing right by you, living through what you wrote. Marvelous description, memorable write.

Beautiful write. The ending really got to me. Thank you for sharing.

I appreciate that.

First you took us to a memory. Then that last line. And that is the reason the memory matters. Beautiful. I knew mine wouldn’t live long, still hurts he’s gone

This is deep, Thomas. Great writing.

Powerfully penned, Thomas. That’s it in a nutshell. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

This has got that certain ouch factor Thomas .. so ragged & real .. write on sir .. poetry needs you .. Neville 😎👍

Ouch. There’s a lot rolled into this one. But the short pieces seem to be the most hard hitting, I’ve found

A great truth compelling as it is dark.
Regards
James

With an original touch and a Bukowskian pen you gave us a sip of yourself. Well done, Thomas!

Fantastic piece. Well said Thomas.

Thanks

Thanks

Wow this is powerful! Honest and speaking the truth as it IS, maybe in that way it opens more eyes to see.

That button is crazy cool, sometimes to abuse is to show attention or to neglect is to show attention. Tight one dude

Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. One must master the secrets of the Love Button.. Appreciate you.

Damian

You just nailed it .. Poetry that is .. not her you know what sir .. 😎👍

Thank you, my friend.

Despite my blush, I loved this! It’s a delicate balance, that.