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Read MoreAs you gaze and come to recognize the black fire within me, and realize you're now claimed, you say, "no gothic rose can be dominated! ...
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreThe lady of sorrow does not possess a name. For the sake of this poem, I will call her: Lady Sorrow. There's another time in another place, where she sat deep between the slopes of a ravine. It was overcast, and so was the spirit in her eyes. Where...
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Wow, this has Edgar Allen Poe written all over it.
Daniel, I’m not following you into hell, so you better repent.Who am I kidding?
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You must be kidding, Meg. Repent? Never! Haha! As long as my hand and I are alive I will continue writing the hauntingly beautiful. Poe had it right, what an inspiration. So, on this story will continue and her sorrows will follow her in death. Maybe, just maybe this character will find a way out of hell, and maybe so will I…
Thanks Meg 😊
Daniel
Gothic-surrealist
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Sharp and vivid . Powerful work.
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Read MoreIt remains so hard to then hedge,when you live here on the edge—live on the cusp of life and death,separated by only a single breath. Peering down from this height,within a dark and endless night—a never-ending sea of black ink,here,...
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Tremendous work. Powerful and poignant.
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Beautifully penned, LDF. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hey LDF…
I was thinking about this piece…
I decided the punctuation tightens the write up…
Very nicely done…
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Read MoreDressed as black as lightless night,the stars exist only in your eyes.Penetrative, oval, emerald eyes which see right through me. Your dress, Victorian, with leather strapping which buckles around you. Signifying your social status. At your command, you gracefully slide a...
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Astounding imagery! That last stanza was interesting :0
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To be continued? Really good, Daniel
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This lady doesn’t fuck around my friend. Epically penned, Daniel. Incredible imagery. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreOur emotions stir from our quivering shadows in the glow of the candlelight. Rhythmically, our black hearts mingle in our beats, playing music ...
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hello Daniele this is written beautifully I love it 💕
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Thanks as always, I’m not sure whether to continue it? My character would definitely become scarier… haha.
Daniel
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. The cadence has a very catchy rhythm and flow. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Shivering, lovely, creepy shivers down your spine… now that tells me I achieved what I set out to make here… thank you!
In fact, your comment inspired me to continue this little gothic-romance thread, haha. Part six coming today!
Daniel
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Hauntingly romantic with creepy tenderness, Daniel. To be honest, I need something to spark creativity in me and this made me pose thought to a genre I’ve yet to really spill ink in. I look forward to reading more in your series.
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Thank you, Pandy. My genre is Gothic-Surrealism. Though I didn’t invent the term, I’ve used it in a literary sense instead of art. Thanks, again and find that spark!
Daniel
Gothic-Surrealist
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I love no Gothic rose can be dominated. This had me along for the ride. Enjoyed this.