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Read MoreThe sputtering smoke of her lamp, throwing quivering shadows on the the cold stone walls of her tomb. But she cannot escape death. And she cannot embrace the life she once possessed in daylight. So, her Gothic heart thunders on, the crimson lamplight of her soullessness, merely...
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The atmospheric density and the haunting dark imagery catch the readers attention with the first words. Your gothic queen is a wonderfully terrifying beauty who makes me want to read more. Brilliant work, Daniel!
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Doing a complete rewrite. As I have realized the potential for this story…
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What imagery. You have the magic of the pen
Daniel. I was completely pulled in from the first line. Thanks for sharing
Jackie 👍🏻
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Read MoreThe moment the holy water sizzled on my flesh, I knewthat I was destined for flames. The priest saw it, frownedand no longer called me, "son."He walked on by, never to bless me again. The moment I died, I ascended.Below me...
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Daniel I fear I will be judged for my delusions I think I will go to hell this is uplifting way to look at things 💕
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I believe I’m going to hell too. We can’t decide when, but we can decide how we meet that end. Love this life the fullest and to any good God that should count for something. I’ll stay strong if you stay strong, Brenda.
Daniel
Gothic-Surrealist
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thank you Daniel hugs 💕
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Read MoreWith each shallowing pulse,my heart bleeds on.With each beat,my heart hollows. With each weakening push of blood through my veins,my heart bleeds on,and my limbs turn cold and deathlike. With each beating of my drum silencing,you can no longer press your...
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Death and passion rolled up in one. The repetition of the heart beating makes it more powerful.
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Sounds like something Type O Negative could put music too. If Peter Steele was still with us. Nicely done, Daniel. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Sensational write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Danile captivating and sexy 💕
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Aww. Captivating and sexy… you could not have put it any better dearest Brenda!
Daniel
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Read MoreMy Gothic heart burning in the sea of tears within. Wrapped in thorny vines, dangling by a thread from the surface. The teary waves above in my eyes are turbulent and the emotional winds lashing. My Gothic fire, my tears of high emotion, my crimson shine...
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. This one packs a punch, with precise jabs of imagery, and knockout worthy wordplay my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Superb write, Daniel. Appreciate you.
Damian