A tender moment between two people. Lovely.

Powerful work.

Love the fact you guys had a record.
I can see where the bass could have been played with the pain the pain, the pain
Good write here.

Great lyrics. You can feel the suffering within the worlds. I always like a good collaboration.

This reminds me so much of my early writing. Back when I was accused of being morbid. It comes as it comes, doesn’t it? Sign of a great collaboration when you can no longer remember who wrote what. This one stirs in the back of my mind. Out of curiosity, how many songs/lyrics does your catalog contain? Im looking forward to seeing more, my friend

This is quite an ‘arousing’ piece Fia…..at least pour moi.😜

What a piece you have presented here, great write indeed…

Without both the good and the bad, both would be meaningless words. An interesting piece!

Now, bring the bad. 😀

Beautifully penned, Fia. “Kittens Got Claws,” comes to mind, which is a Whitesnake song. lol. This is a phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Fantastic.

That’s quite a story Damian.
I’m invested now, thanks for sharing…

Kept me reading on, Damian. Excellent write and important message.

Daniel

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the story my friend. It did take a while to get here. Over 30 years off and on, we worked together. I think I had to get sober to notice what was really going on, while I was drinking I let it slide, probably because he was also my drinking buddy. I mean I knew he could be a real prick and he was becoming less of the person I knew in the beginning. We both had demons, I chose to slay mine. Thanks so much for the continued support my friend, I think you’re one of the few really following. Appreciate you.

Damian

Side note, im reading through this & thinking…Pisces. So similar to my Pisces daughter in many ways. Pisces are some of my favorite people. Joey…I’ve met people like him. Singularly focused with no real touch on the human aspect of the people they’re around. As my daughter would “Dude don’t know how to read the room.” It works for him, can’t conceive of anyone else being different. I can’t even imagine the feeling it must give you when people sing your song in the audience. I would be over the moon & grinning like a madwoman. Always enjoy the Damian journeys, my friend. Keep ’em comin’

Beautifully penned, Nick. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Wrote many poems about my wife but none due her justice. Thanks for the read, friend. Much appreciated.