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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreIt starts off full and swelling bursting at the seams as if it will engulf the world in its beauty Slowly, ever so slowlyIt begins to disappearAnd shadow creeps in I secretly prayed for it to stay To embrace me in its warmthMy prayers...
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Thank you, Me;))
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When we’re linked to the moon’s tides…it can get overwhelming. I’m a full-on moon child myself, I get it
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Thank you, Willow;))
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I loved how visual this was, but also in a very subtle way. I could see the sort of waxing and waning pattern but at the same time we weren’t talking about a literal moon, so it was a weird kind of take this very visual thing and make it into a feeling. And then it’s all wrapped up in really beautiful language.
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Thank you, Green;))
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The other morning, I was in a very sexual dream. it was intense! And then my alarm went off and scared the absolute hell outta me. Talk about a rip-off!
Your words reminded me of my own misfortune. LOL
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I was looking out the window at the moon and my mind just went with it. Thank you, Styxian ;))
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An excellent metaphorical take, Fia. Love it.
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Thank you, Tim;))
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian:))
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The ebb and flow of the man/woman dynamic.
I digs this
Much respect
Naaj
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Thank you, Naaj;))
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Superb work.
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RPM wrote a new post
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Read MoreShe slept turned gently on her side,Her back to him, her breathing deep.He lay behind her, hands still tiedBy fear and years and broken sleep.He longed to touch, to press, to feelThe shape he’d loved so long ago.But silence...
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Outstanding! One of the best poems I’ve read all n starsrite… and I mean that. Into the list it goes! Will be checking out your other work.
Daniel
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Thanks for the amazing comment, you made my day!
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Echo the others
This is how erotica is writtenBravo !
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Thank you Poetspeak. I’m grateful that you spent time to read and comment.
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I steer clear of porn for the most part. But this is not that. It has taste and intrigue. It’s a thoroughly enthralling read. Well done.
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Thank you so much. I know I have the tendency to straddle the line between erotica and porn, so I am appreciative of your comment.
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Passionately penned, RPM. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damien! I value your support.
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This was a moment in time, very precious, captured beautifully
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Thank you for your precious comment! Much appreciated!
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Thank you so much. I am very grateful for the comment!
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” The years had left some tangled vines—
But still, tonight, they chose to choose.”Mic drop.
Much respect
Naaj
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Thank you…honored that you would read and comment
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read MoreScreams are amplified inside the chamberInsults are hurled before any intent is shownThey speak of harming their leftist neighborWhile calloused hearts become hard as stone Hate-speak echoes off cold desperate wallsEnvious egos grow bitter before turning sour Hanging judges fill...
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Right from the X posts to the Headlines. Radical right meets radical left – everyone in between pays the price! I’m going to end here but I’m coming back with a link to one I wrote.
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Thanks so much for reading, Paula. This write is just an observation, it’s not about left or right, blue or red, donkey or elephant to me. It’s more good vs. evil in my opinion. It’s about wealthy vs. poor. Most politicians are owned by someone, a corporation, a wealthy 1% family. Sure I used the word leftist, but it can be whatever at the end of the day. But that was the flavor I was going for was money and power equals no accountability. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Great write, Paula. Chaos is running rampant in the world these days. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian great write but the buffoons that run the world aren’t listening.
Too busy making money by any means possible.
Lies have become the truth and truth lies.
Orwell saw it coming.-
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Peter. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I agree they aren’t listening, and making billions. We’re going to have Trillionaire’s soon, corruption is all that’s trickling down in the end. It is topsy-turvy, everything has been turned on it’s head. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It doesn’t surprise me that rich people try to screw over the poor. What surprises me is how many people are so happy to get screwed while complaining that they have hard lives. They want war. They want blood because some people disagree or just tell them reality. It’s wild.
Great ink
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It seems the more I observe humanity, that there are people who look for scapegoats, especially the wealthy 1%. Such vampires. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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“To live outside the law you must be honest”
…….. bob dylan
Song: Absolutely Sweet Marie
When there’s so words of my own to describe something I go back to the Master
That’s happening a lot lately …
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Speak. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Love the Dylan quote. Great song as well. Can’t go wrong with Mr. Zimmerman. I get spells of that sometimes. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I believe this one will only continue to become more relevant as long as they wealthy hold the keys to freedom. Unfortunately. An reverse Robin Hood situation we got going on. I swe things happening & quietly write down my suspicion on their next crime. I wish I wasn’t right so often. And you…prophet. I hope it’s not too late & the scales can still be tipped, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I couldn’t agree with you more. It is Robin Hood in reverse. The world has gone all topsy-turvy lately, the lines are blurred. I wish I wasn’t right so often, actually I would loved to be proved wrong on a lot of things. I hope so as well my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Superb work.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Green wrote a new post
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Read MoreDear _______, I am just a VOICE inside your head as you read this letter. That's all I am. You can try to read it like you think I would. Putting all the inflections where I would. Trying to give it that 'thing' that was distinctly me. But it doesn't fit...
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Powerfully penned, Green. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful work. Tremendous.
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Dear G,
A fabulous concept that for me, has me thinking of all the times I wrote something that was based in the discomfort of having to share my feelings. On topics I would just as soon keep locked in my heart and worse, my head. I so enjoyed this write. Poignant and very relatable. H🌷
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreYou said that you wanted me. It's hard to believe. With your head between her thighs, And you holding her knees. Not once did you glance up, To see that I’m there. With your head held in place, As she’s pulling your hair. You said that you...
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Damn, Fia. Straight up fire on this spill my friend. Amazing work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Haha, thank you, Damian ;))
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Ick
Now that’s a visual
Uh No
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I’m cracking up. Thank you, Poetspeak;))
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![Profile picture of Paula Jobi]()
Wow! I wonder if I could seize that anger? That is very powerful! I might give an angry piece a try. Mine is usually of the “woe is me” variety. Very powerful!
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I dedicated my first post today to you…
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Omg that is so sweet Paula. Thank you
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A good write! I loved your moon analogy. “)