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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreThe sun rose with a sweet scentMy death is callingYou cannot cheat deathThree lines down an arm proves it The moon runsAs the candy corn colored sky emergesEscape is not an optionThe knives have been sharpened I am not the first...
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you,Peter;))
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Fantastic work. Powerful writing.
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Thomas;))
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
Heartfelt in a new way
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Jim;))
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![Profile picture of Drieks]()
“The liver
The spleen
Rip out the intestines
Making me his queen”Amazing writing Fia.
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Thank you, Drieks
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![Profile picture of Tim]()
Nice and dark Fia. I love the candy corn colored sky emerges line.
Death takes its bride one organ at a time. Sounds like horror to me and a good one for the halloween season. 🙂-
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Thank you, Tim. I had fun doing this one. The candy corn was a nice touch. Did a challenge with Twofiftythree. We had to write gore, and you have to add candy corn
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Hauntingly penned, Fia. Look at you writing horror, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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I am trying. I’m a complete chicken. Love vampires, werewolves etc….
Thank you, Damian;))
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![Profile picture of Benjamin Scraps]()
Violent imagery & language apropos for an October horror film marathon. I’ve got some catching up to do, fer sure. Thanks for holding it down here at Stars Rite. Much appreciated!
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There are a lot of writers getting in the spirit of it.
Thank you, Benjamin
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![Profile picture of Sappho (Elke)]()
Honest, morbid and great wording. A gorgeous piece, dear Fia!
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Thank you so much, Sappho
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![Profile picture of Knight]()
It builds with a violent intensity.
Very apt for Halloween. But also death is always with us. All year round. You poem is very truthful.
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Thank you, Knight 🩷
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![Profile picture of goldenmyst]()
Your reflections on this conversation with death are the stuff of great poetry. Your poem is deeply felt and strong in imagery that is as poetic as it is strong. Truly a great poem.
John
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Thank you, John 🩷
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello beautiful Fia powerful dark here but empowering too ❤️
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Paula Jobi wrote a new post
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Read MoreGODDESS ON GODDESS Four large breasts bang together. Smacks not unlike balls slapping furiously on plump ass cheeks!But no men are ever allowed. EVER!They are locked out! Men are putrid. Today is only for the "great" women. Their rubenesque curves make...
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Oh this is hot. The wrist inside Tara brought her to climax. Yup very potent and erotic write. love it
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Thanks so much.
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreSpeak to meWords insight and exciteSpeak to meCradle me in actionSpeak to meTell me the nuance of your touchSpeak to meI overflow in anticipationSpeak to meLet it be rough and rawSpeak to metake me in the dark so I...
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Ooohhh. This is good!
Loved take me in the dark so I can see the light
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Thank you so much, Adel. It was fun.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Fia. This write was fire my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian,))
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![Profile picture of Styxian]()
I feel that this is a calling out that we al can relate to, and be enthralled by. it’s an all consuming request that is determined and also inviting too. Like “give me that and I’ll give you this” type of trade. We write with emotions, so perhaps we look for emotions in return. Yeah?
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Thank you Styxian;))
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![Profile picture of goldenmyst]()
Fia, I could feel the entreaty of the woman as she beseeched her lover to give her words. I do agree the right words can make for a magical night in our out of bed. This poem speaks to me in a way that I could feel. Very well done.
John
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Thank you, John;))
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![Profile picture of RPM]()
Oh yes! Tell me more…more…more!
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Ooo, RPM. (Smiling)
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read MoreBeen peddling cruel dreams Kerosene lies forged in hate Nothing is ever as it seems When logic's robbed of weight Still holding onto an illusion Drifting further from reality Ain’t no calm in mass confusion Useful idiots prefer brutality Upside down heading off-road This house of cards is...
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“useful idiots prefer brutality” killer fuckin line. excellent write.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, twofiftythree. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I love that line as well, great minds think alike. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of S. Libellule]()
So relatable… nicely done
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, S. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I want music for this one. Currently I’m working on a song called, “Novocain.” The words are posted here on the site. I got the music laid out, got the growls recorded, trying to get a good vocal take on the verses and bridge. Which requires me to sing. lol. Glad to see you back! Appreciate you.
Damian
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Brilliantly written socially critical text, dear Damien! You will definitely make a killer song out of it!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Tim]()
This is by far one of your best poems, Damian. Every stanza kicks ass. I like the Lennon reference and where you went with it. Great one!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I knew somebody would get the Lennon reference. It’s one of my favorites writes as well, I knew I had something once I penned the first verse. Sometimes a writer just knows.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Well this is strong! Like flexing on a page. It’s tight with its rhymes and meter, like a pro boxer hitting us with a thesaurus!
(damn, that’s a clever description, huh! LOL)
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Really cool commentary brother, your continued support means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks, Mary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Some people have no soul. The sad part is they thrive in their own filth. Great ink friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Dude, I totally agree. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Enjoyed this poem immensely. From the rhymes, to the flow to the powerful message. Outstanding job Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Hey brother, thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thoroughly enjoyed from end to end .. No kiddin, write on brother .. Neville 😎👍
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Fantastic work.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of goldenmyst]()
This is strong as straight vodka on the morning after the Bolshevik revolution in Russia. Very strong my friend. Truly a power tonic in this age of authoritarianism in America. You hit the bullseye. You are a master at writing song lyrics that rock my soul.
John
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. It is a sad state of affairs these days. Like witnessing a train wreck playing out and being strapped inside the lavatory of that locomotive. Thank you for your support my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You know, there are times I wish you weren’t so nail on the head accurate. But these are dark days we’re entered into. Best to look them square in the eye. Brilliantly penned, my friend. Into the list it goes, as you say!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Gotta look them square in the eye, make them flinch first. Always enjoy your commentary my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful stuff Fia