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Read MoreCancer:That verminous dreg of death! A maulerwho sucker-punches, spars,and destroyswith body blowsits challenger's ghostly form. Even money—unable to go the distancewith all its supremacy—gets outwittedand KO'd. With undefeated form,Cancer prevails far too often. Life's referee of remaining daysstands over another challengerand vigorously counts...
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Thank you, Thomas.
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hello dearest Tim I hope they find a cure I cry everytime I see a St Judes comercial kids battling cancer my condolences on your family member 💕
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Thanks very much, Crimsin.
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Into the book it belongs! The boxing metaphor is clever, people fighting for their life are very familiar with pugilist philosophy. Because it is indeed a fight, and some defy the odds for a while, because they possess a fighters heart. Excellent work, so sorry for your loss. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I appreciate your comment, Damian. Thanks.
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Great write Tim and sorry for your loss.
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Thanks very much, Peter.
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Read MoreIf I don't buy you roses If I don't buy you roses Don't bother asking whyTheir life spans but a momentCompared to you and I. Their petal's scented pleasuresMay soothe a troubled soulYet what you've done for me loveso few have...
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Beautifully penned, Tim. Two incredible poems my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much, Damian. 🙂
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That first stanza hit. I love flowers but they die, and I feel bad to see them go. Beautifully written.
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Thanks for the comment, Fia. 🙂
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Beautiful work, Tim. Powerhouse.
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Thank you Thomas. 🙂
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Read MoreAfter lacing my running shoes,I strode down the sidewalklike a ship plowing through the sea.Five miles, I thought, do or die. In the distance, I heard the cara mile away tearing through streets. He was a nuisance.He drove a 1970 Chevrolet...
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Well, Damn, both things met their end. Very interesting poem. Nice;))
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Thank you, very much for the comment, Fia. 🙂
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this reminds me of a pickup that used to race down my street you could hear him coming for miles but when he went by it was just a streak of an odd light I used to honestyly think it was Lucifer…it’s crazy…I really enjoyed this 💕
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Thanks Crimson. Lets hope he doesn’t come back to haunt you with his spinning wheels.
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Brilliantly penned, Tim. Love the flow and the imagery my friend, amazing storytelling as well. What a waste of a classic machine, assholes find a way to ruin everything they touch. lol. I’m also a car guy. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Much appreciated.
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Superb work. Love the boxing metaphor.