Superb work. Love the boxing metaphor.

hello dearest Tim I hope they find a cure I cry everytime I see a St Judes comercial kids battling cancer my condolences on your family member 💕

Powerfully penned, Tim. Into the book it belongs! The boxing metaphor is clever, people fighting for their life are very familiar with pugilist philosophy. Because it is indeed a fight, and some defy the odds for a while, because they possess a fighters heart. Excellent work, so sorry for your loss. Appreciate you.

Damian

Great write Tim and sorry for your loss.

Beautifully penned, Tim. Two incredible poems my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

That first stanza hit. I love flowers but they die, and I feel bad to see them go. Beautifully written.

Beautiful work, Tim. Powerhouse.

Well, Damn, both things met their end. Very interesting poem. Nice;))

this reminds me of a pickup that used to race down my street you could hear him coming for miles but when he went by it was just a streak of an odd light I used to honestyly think it was Lucifer…it’s crazy…I really enjoyed this 💕

Brilliantly penned, Tim. Love the flow and the imagery my friend, amazing storytelling as well. What a waste of a classic machine, assholes find a way to ruin everything they touch. lol. I’m also a car guy. Appreciate you.

Damian

Brilliant.

hello dearest Tim I love the rhythm and content of this write beautiful 💕

Beautifully penned, Tim. Truly an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian