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Backdeckbenny (Peter) wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Winter is Over

Poetry

May 6, 2025

5

A dying love turns everything gelid bodies frozen solid pain entombed by fleshy permafrost so cold limbs might snap off tears could turn to icicles which frozen tear ducts can't release hateful words leave lips to turn to sleet in the cold air the body,the heart,the mind cannot survive...

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3 Comments
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks Indie
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Yes I noticed sometime after I’d posted that Indie had posted something similar.
  Clearly, she is a rare talent just like me…. rotflmfao
- Willow
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  It’s that push pull poison that gets us every time
NAAJIR wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Lucid

Action & Adventure, Romance

May 6, 2025

10

LucidI dirty talk As my fingers stalk Allow me to take a slow walk Inside of your succulent sub-conscious mind Feel me grope you from behind As I feed you these hedonistic whispers ...

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8 Comments
- Willow
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Audible gulp on the last line…
  - NAAJIR
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    I heard that gulp in so many whispers.
    Lovely…
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Passionately penned, Naaj. You bringing it in this spill, fantastic write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - NAAJIR
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Always appreciate your feedback, Damian
    
    Much respect
    
    Naaj
- Pandy
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Damn, Naajir! Welcome to my imagination, I think I could keep you in there a little longer..
  - NAAJIR
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Glad I could sneak into your imagination, Pandy
    A smile, a wink and a thank you
    for your time
    
    Naaj
- NAAJIR
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Diggin the simplicity of your response, hun.
  Sexy…
- NAAJIR
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Glad it was well received, harriet.
  Thx for the support. It’s deeply appreciated…
Backdeckbenny (Peter) and NAVINA are now friends

• 1 year, 2 months ago

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Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Cooch

Poetry

May 6, 2025

8

I licka finger bestFinger sings a do re meCreates an instant buzzSends rays of the 1st degreeGeese sink my swanRolling, it just gets worsePin the head of the toothless dickMilk the maid and steal her pursePopping pills, a dope...

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7 Comments
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Powerful work. Sharp and vivid.
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks Thomas.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Cleverly penned, Keith. This is great spill my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    thanks
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Geese sinks my swan.. clever. Enjoyed this
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    xo
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  xo
M.E wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

A Seasoned Heart: A Triple Self-portrait

Poetry

May 6, 2025

19

I almost bit her neck,but her puffed, glossy lipsTrapped cigarette smokeI don't smoke—still, I craved a drag.Snow White bit my Adam's apple.The wicked and the weakface in the eyes of a troubled mirror.Heart beating in her mouth,she...

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16 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, M.E. A nice trilogy of poems my friend. Stellar imagery. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - M.E
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, brother! I appreciate it “)
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Tremendous work. Powerful and dark.
  - M.E
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Thomas! As always “)
- Drieks
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  “Snow White bit my Adam’s apple.”
  Ridiculously good…
  
  Thank you for sharing.
  - M.E
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you for reading and for the comment! “)
- M.E
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thank you, Aidra! Means alot to me “)
- Poetic Gawdess
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Now this…wow. Wicked and dark just like I like.
  That line: “Snow White bit my adam’s apple” Mmm— so good. 😈 Thank you for sharing! xx
  ~P.G💋
  - Poetic Gawdess
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    And not to mention, there’s Medusa :’) sooooo goooood!!!!
  - M.E
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you! This was an old poem. I thought to repost on StarRite. I am glad you had a bite! 😉
    
    Whispering (Yes, I do have a hard on Medusa, me too) lol
    - Poetic Gawdess
      1 year, 2 months ago
      
      And a delicious bite it was! I’m all for the oldies but goodies 😉 and I figured we shared the love for Medusa, hehe. xx
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Super creative take on these classic characters. I can see this poem being written into some anthology show or film. Nice work M.E
  - M.E
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, my friend. I have envisioned this “fairy tale” for a while. And I am satisfied with the result. Its going to be quiet a movie of it. Haha
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  All I wanted was love,
  but I didn’t want to get my hands dirty.
  
  Wow, this is a great line for Medusa. Enjoyed this
  - M.E
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Fia!
    Thats one of my favorite lines me as well. “)
- M.E
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thank you Dragon-Fire! I appreciate it. “)
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