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Read Moreshe railed and railed incessantly 'bout sumthin i did the other daybitchin about this that n the thirdit was blah blah blah mixed with a bunch of epithetsfuck you muthafucka...blah blah blaharrogant piece of shit...blah blah blahself centered bastard...blah blah blah and a blah...
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Cleverly penned, Naaj. All they have to do is ask, I concur with this logic my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It’s the passive-aggressive judo they get a kick out of.
I’m game…makes the sex more intense.Always, big thx for the support
Naaj
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I think they know but they be too much in their feelings these days….
Big thx for the energy Hun…always
Naaj
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Read MoreMillions of AngelsIn the night skyWatching over usShining their lightSometimes they twinkleSometimes they shineProviding protectionGod's amazing designMillions of AngelsCrying in painThey watch us consumeAs we live in vainSometimes they questionThe mistakes that we makeSometimes they explodeA supernovas's heartbreak Millions of Angels Constellations...
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Thank you for reading and the nice words..appreciate it
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Daniel Long wrote a new post
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Read MoreFrigid, calm front hides in northern winds,vast sky of my bedroom dims. Stream in wintericed over, mother's embraceletting go at bedtime. Still rainfall,sky's dark pillows,eyelids become anchors, smothering. The cold frontblanketing these damp lids,peacefully covers the coming storm.
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. You were a great writer then as well my friend. Twenty years ago huh? My high school days seem like a million summers ago. Appreciate you.
Damian
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My mother was the opposite of this. Now though, she’s a different person. You have an exquisite way of expressing yourself, Daniel
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Introspective write, Daniel. Very powerful spill my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I admire the ease with which you express your inner world. Stoic, melancholy, honest and beautiful write. You are there in every word, thank you for the share!
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Okay, that is gut-wrenching. To lay there and live a slow death that you did not sign up for. Not right at all.
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Thanks for the thoughtful comment Fia.
It’s not right and it’s not wrong , it’s just the way it is.Like everything in life,even suffering is impermanent.
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Quite moving..thank you for sharing
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I’ve often felt that pain is preferable to apathy. That quiet passing out of space. This haunts & hurts. So often the case, & always hard
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First the Technical: Excellent consistency with meter, beautifully executed rhyme.
Composition: Incredible depth. As Willow noted, the piece reflects a falling away, a loss of touch and intimacy with no explanation. It’s a death of sorts, and you’ve painted it perfectly. Really well done.
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Haha… thx for the affirmation hun