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hello beautiful Fia this is so passionate and painful I only hope it is fiction love can be cruel 💕
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Thank you, crimsin. Yes it is fiction. I am glad you felt something from this. xoxo
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Simply amazing write my friend, you changed it up a little on this one. Excellent! Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. I always want to try something new. Always appreciate your comments.
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Awww, Fia =(
How poignantly vivid your pen has laid its sorrows’ disappointments upon our hearts … so many times we’ve gone through such relatably plaintive ache, yet, your poetic emotion expresses it all so vividly, as though it could be any one of us experiencing your own moments of disquiet.
“Love is a demon’s creation.
It obscures and twists the mind,
That being in complete submergence is good.”Oh, yes! Nothing’s like LOVE it when it’s good, when all is wine and roses; for, love shall seek not but for its own satisfaction. It will bend and twist you, and shine and dim upon you, while holding onto those within its grip. And, there is no single answer to the question of what love really is, but I have learned that when love is in control, there are no guarantees.
I so admire the smoothness and imagery with which you paint emotions, feeling, and thoughts upon the canvas our minds, hearts, and souls … the hallmarks of a true artist’s touch.
Swearing we’ll never fall in-love again, our needs are far too deep not to.
Beautiful work, Dear Poetess … thank you for sharing! ⁓ Richard🖌Superb artwork choice:
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“Excellent use of metaphor, too.”
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Read More“Dinner time is family timeBut a majority of the time daddy no one can find, “Mama with disappointing looks sometimes leave it aloneAs temptation eats her ass up to go through daddy’s phone, “But his son secretly searched...
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Read MoreYou enter my pride, tearing me free of my egostripping me bareNude feelings trembleunder your stoic gaze lets peel it back slowlike there’s somethin worthy underneatheven tho we know there’s nothinbut skin scars and warnin signs Your eyes penetrate, burning my...
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Very intense write. Both meshed well in this piece 💓
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hello beautiful Fia thank you graciously from us both woman for such a lovely comment 💕
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Powerful work.
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thank you graciously from us both dearest Thomas 💕
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hello lovely Raven thank you for the love on this write 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda & Ambjr. Incredible collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.
Damian
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Read MoreShe danced alone in the streets.Oblivious to 'their' stares.'They' said she was mad.But 'they' just couldn't hear the music.
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this is beautiful dearest Benny 💕
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Thank you for reading.
Find the song by Sting called They Dance Alone.
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Even if they could hear it, some of them would still say it. Imaginations in full stagnation. This is lovely. Really builds the visual beautifully
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Thanks and I’m glad you enjoyed. 🙏
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I am madly enthralled and peaked by this loveliness. The depth is Everything. Umph.
Gentle man, thank you for whispering this one upon us❤️
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Sometimes, if I’m lucky,the words come out and please others.
I’m glad you enjoyed my words.😘
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Read MoreTwo hearts, both alike in rhythm,share a tomb - a tomblike existence, indeed! While our meetings are forbidden!A place where no one will suspect us.And within this tomb we share lips.
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“Within the tomb we share lips,” that is a never-ending romance.
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hello dearest Daniel this is really darkly great 💕
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Gothically penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Hj xoxo