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Read MoreDomainWe get it in downloads and write in clockwork elves Clockwork machines manifested from clockwork selvesSo many Dali clocks on So many shelves. How we made &Make. Letters to break the fetters and make The soul: Shake. The Earth: Quake.Writing-ignitinginShake n bake, baked. I want...
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Thank you Del…
Hoping to get back into the routine of writing…
Very much appreciated…
After I wrote this…
I was thinking about poetry and prose…
Rhyme and off rhyme…
Or like, in this piece, I feel this sort of
approach, with like…Internal rhyme and rhyme shifts…
Well I was just thinking how it effects
the senses…
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I’m digging the Dali within this. I can see the melting clock as I read this. Yet you’ve awakened that clock, for one last tock!
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Thank you Styx…
Very much appreciated…
Gotta love the Dali… 🙂
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Read MoreNot for Lulz for LightIt is a special kind of alchemy, followingsigns – To which – Most are blind. Drivenby vision. Possessed by mission, assigned.Mission: Divine. Decision, defined. Acrosspathways of a diamond mind to forever findPoetic skies, in which...
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Read MoreIt's not Us vs Them.It's Us vs ourselves.The war starts and ends in our own minds. Labelling them "Them" turns us into Them.He's not Muslim. Not Republican. Not Black. Not gay.Just human. Labels are seeded at birth.Parents plant them.Media, culture, and...
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We are humans. I see it.
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. We are all just humans being. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fia and Damian
Thanks for reading.
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Well said and to the point. Nice work.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Monster
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A laudable effort, Fia 👍
I love your imaginative theme and how you’ve creatively made this form your own with your unique touches that catch the reader’s mind’s-eye … enjoyably interesting and entertaining.
Having said that, I’ll also mention a couple of techy issues:
1. Syllable counts are out in L3 & 4 (should be 2/2), and L6 (should each be a…Read More
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I’m digging the whole vibe/quake in this.
And I enjoyed the opening, the use of the work clockwork.
Like there are different gears that shift our writing – hence earthquake!
Just fantastic amigo!