I feel the simmering temper in this piece. Just because it is broken does not mean it can be made new.🧡

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Another excellent write with raw honesty my friend. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

That is crazy inner turmoil with a demon on his heals. Oh man I feel for him and his torment.

I think you’ve always been a badass you just didn’t realize it until today…. Do I have to go hide ? Or are you going to kick my ass for saying it?

Chère W.,
I’ll try and tell you what I feel in a foreign language, so please forgive my mistakes.
This eye candy poem brings back memories of the beauty you posted on/in DUP.

It’s no coincidence that I am a fan of your writes.

And yes, it’s important that you feel seen, cared for and loved by people who surround you. Very important and I think you deserve that too.

This is more or less the idea of the coop, recently posted with the very special and talented Drieks:

I’m Alive – Coop Drieks & Duhsjaak/Gus

Sloppy as hell and with hay fever kicking in full force, but you’ll get the feeling.

I don’t mean to be rude, but this thanking business is a very region tradition thing.
So:
if you’re American: thank you very much
in all other cases: I love your poem to bits and can’t wait for the next.
May your Sunday be beautiful!

Warm regards, Gus

Hahaha, standing on it Lady, to tight

Thank you, Brenda 🧡

Thank you, Peter

I like that quote! This is what one might call a warning shot that I’m about to clear out the closet. It gets messy after this. Thank you, bro, for feeling this and for your words

Thank you, Thomas

I’ll go check out the link. I’ve experienced a few of the coop pieces and much enjoyed the collaboration and words. Thank you, Gus

The action here was told with strikingly fantastic narrative. And the senuality beteween the women was hot as a coal flaming in a hearth my friend and told with just the right imagery. Truly this was a page turner. I was riveted on the story from beginning to end. Truly great tale as potent as a shot of tequila.

John

Passionately penned, Fia. I was wondering when you were going to write another chapter to the series. Excellent storytelling and great dialogue as always my friend. A nice read that was Chef’s kiss in my opinion. Appreciate you cuz.

Damian

I enjoyed this. My favorite line came early, “I thrive on the smut.” That was great.
Regards
James