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Read MoreAuthor’s Note:Inspired by “The Call To Adventure”, by JoshBond. To me, the underlying message is to do freedom responsibly. For me, this involves a mindfulness of both the internal and the external. In this poem, Josh incorporates subtle, irregular...
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Read MoreIf I could take All of your tears I'd form from themAn ocean On which nobody Would dare sail It would be yours To flow free upon A current That never fails A wave The never breaks From tears The world cannot shake And waterfalls That drown the sadness Of years lost In the whirlpool Being...
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An ocean that no one would dare to sail. An ocean of my own tears. Well that is something. I like this;))
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Very happy this spoke to you Fia. Thank you for reading! 🙂
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What a beautiful concept. It’s funny how often we sink under the weight of our pain. To think of tears as an ocean of our own making and subject to our own belief is beautiful
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Thank you Willow. I am glad the beauty in this ocean resounds.
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Beautifully penned, Brandon. I concur with Fia and Willow. Another excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you good sir!
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Read MoreIN THE REALM OF EROTICA We dive into the realm of erotica where passion and desire never cease where words dance naked in front of us and our bodies yearn to be released We explore every inch of each other In the depths of our souls...
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Chère L.,
Yes yes yes, amen to that.
It confirms our attraction to each other, our love, our being human, everything and than some.
And you wrote it in the best possible way.
I love it a lot.
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Thank you 😊 I’m glad you like it.
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Standing up applauding this. I agree whole heartily. Bravo
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Thank you 😊
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Beautifully penned, Lizz. Such a passionate write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The physical is 10%, but the real satisfaction is the 90% mental connection.
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The last line lands in a way that makes you want to reread this again, and let it linger. This caught my breath.
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hello dearest Brandon good morning thank you graciously I’m happy you like it ❤️
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This reads almost like an invocation, a chant of summoning. Much enjoyed this. As Brandon said, it invites rereading 🧡
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hello beautiful Willow thank you lovely one I appreciate you thoughts these just uncurrents of feeling rising ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with dark undertones my friend. I concur with Willow and Brandon. Amazing read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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Read MoreIn a hotel room far from herethere was a perfect version of you and mewe ate instant noodlesand looked out at the purple winter skyline You let me talk and talk and talk and for one night I was free...
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oh wow beautiful Indie this hurts…I have such illusions and I still hold onto them even when proven wrong by others hugs great write ❤️
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Thank you so much, Bren ❤️
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That ending is like a gut punch. Lovely write.
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Thank you Fia 🙂
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I remember writing once “images of you and me never equal any semblance of we.” This caught my breath and took me back to that moment. I agree with Fia, those last lines are powerful and painful.
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Thank you so much Willow. It’s not a good way to feel at all.
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“OUCH”. Agree with those above, it is a very powerful write and painful to read and know it happens far too often. -Curt
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Thank you Curt 🙂
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Powerfully penned, Indie. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. That ending was painful indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian, appreciate it 🙂
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Traumatic
Hard to recognize when they sell you out.Keep punching Indie ..
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Thank you xx
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The pain of knowing betrayal. It’s shattering. Thank you for sharing your poem.
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You had a full poem and you broke it up to have omitted pieces. Interesting concept