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Read MoreYou have no idea how chaotic and stressful my life has been in the last several weeksI’m living with a passive aggressive nutjobno more smiles or laughterthose days are overone second she’s quiet, the next she’s cryinga minute later...
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Of course I wanted to fuck her at the restaurant and we did. Just not in the same story. We met in another story at a different place and time. She was good with no menopause issues. Were taking a ride down to visit you in Miss after Memorial Day.
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Certain things in life men and woman will never understand about one another. I feel your pain but I don’t understand it.
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Cool. Let’s make it happen!
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Now you’ve done it. I’m scared to fucking death. I want an ovary transplant when I start to get hot flashes
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Would that work? I’m sure you have connections in the medical field. You can make that happen. You’ll be a new woman. Recharged and full of estrogen.
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LOL. Never heard of such a thing. Hormone supplements are the therapy of choice. It’s amazing how many girls I know get testosterone pellets. Apparently, it boosts libido massively. Yes, I said testosterone. Women have that too.
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I know woman have testosterone but they need to watch how much their injecting into their bloodstream. Before you know it, there looking in the mirror and wondering why they look like their boyfriend or husband.
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Gyn or Endocrinologists give the dose, usually by subcutaneous beads.
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Read MoreSit down, take a seatI can't control myselfshe's about to wash my hairher gorgeous body inches from my facethe water & her fingers interact with my scalpthe shampoo she uses has this sweet, flowery scentmy eyes closed as I...
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ahh… great to be reading you yet again my dear adored versatile prolific poet n my deep friend, loveable ev Keith:)
& yep this is a short sweet power packed write of yours.. that inching in nearness… that magnetic zing in that pulling in space.. that electrifying gentle touch n the massaging wetness of an aromatic shampooing act… aw you leave me absolutely wordless n stunned in this immense masterpiece so concise .. sensual n ah that stretch of peaking imagination that follows all .. is undeniably pure ecstasy.. whatev impure shade it may be filled in;)
n yes, you are there! that final closure of a topsy turvy twist keith-wise;)
to be honest, all along my maze of mind was wandering wondering over the laters & metaphors of this all, hidden or explicit;)
great take dear One xo
my first SR read here & yes this is epic:)
light love ev
uma
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So glad you enjoyed this piece Uma. Thank you for reading and joining starsrite. xoxo
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Read MoreThe warmth of my tongue enters Kissing the lips of her parted petals Usual suspects repeat offenders Sweet moans as her rhythm settles Lost in passion moving to the flow All the worries give way to pleasure Tension fades releasing angelic glow Melting in my cadence...
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Great title
Pleasure journey
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Speak. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. I liked the title as well, kinda stands out there, you dig? Definite pleasure journey. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Love this piece Damian. Well written my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I read the title, the summary &…my jaw still dropped when I started reading the actual poem! Ya turnin’ up the heat in here, my friend!
Side note, when I started my hand at erotica, I was so self-conscious that I created an alternate account on DUP to hide behind while I worked out how & what my erotic voice sounds like. I remember you saying you always worry it sounds corny…absolutely nothing corny about your erotica, my friend! 🔥
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Ok, maybe I’m not as horrible at writing erotica as I thought I was. But you’re right, it’s not my most confident voice. lol. Anyhow, I’m not shutting them out like I used to, if I have an idea I entertain it now. Thanks for always being so supportive my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I like this style of erotica.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Reggie. So glad you liked the write my friend. I prefer this style as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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damn. excellent write.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Ambjr. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Oh, you’re a boy with a beat, Damian. I can feel it. Music all over it.
“All the worries give way to pleasure” – got the Marvin Gay “Sexual Healing” going on.
You can be my ‘Repeat Offender’ any time.xoxo
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, DK. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. That’s a huge compliment, “Sexual Healing” and Marvin Gaye that’s stellar company. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This was from an inspiration. Very well done and had all the right elements. Love it. ;))
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Yeah, it was inspired. You wrote an erotica piece, then Willow had one, Then Meg, Then Mary, then Naaj. I’m sure there were others, it was like everybody was writing erotica that day. lol. So I followed suit. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreIn this cafe, with dirt for wallpaper. The heat is a bitch, and the fan in the ceiling is the worst— turning counter-clockwise. Sipping on my cup of coffee and milk. Too many flies, buzzing, fighting over throne, fighting over food, fighting over fly-chicks. Whatever they are fighting for— only that...
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Sounds hot and sticky. A summer day.
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A hot and lonesome summer day. “)
Thank you, Fia!
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Chewing gum, or strawberry. My favorite flavors since childhood. 😀
Thank you, Adira! Your comments make my day! “)
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I swear I know these moments. Drags & weighs the body down. This is a doozy
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Yeah. I am sorry you can relate to this. Thanks, willlow for reading! “)
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Thats what it was called back then. “)
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Cleverly penned, M.E. Relatable write my friend, we’ve all been there. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you brother! Highly appreciated! “)
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Don’t want to be there but you forced me in this place with your detailed writing. DAMN GOOD! If you want an ice cream cone, go to Dampkitten’s poem “Poetspeak Sweet”. There you’ll find an ice cream cone and a whole lot more.
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I apologize. It got to be written and vented. Thank you for reading and liking it! “)
Hmm..I’ll check it out rn. Thanks “)
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Yeah, they have bubble gum ice cream, and it’s gross. Also, have you tried the cotton candy green seedless grapes? My God, they taste just like it. Weird.
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Bubble gum flavour id gross! I disagree. But hearing of cotton candy green seedless grapes, I think you are right about the bubble gum flavour in there. Hahaha.
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LOL… I thought you were referencing my poem from the beginning. And now, I find out you like strawberry ice cream. OMG. By the way, is this ‘mosquito wing’ phrase an allusion to Smells Like Teen Spirit?
You do realize that you could enter this poem in the ‘coffee’ poem contest don’t you?
You will find this extremely weird, but the imagery in your piece is very reminiscent of the hotel scene early in the movie, Apocalypse Now.
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Lol. I saw your poem after our fellow poet: visions_of_insanity’s recommendation for ice cream. It ended up another type of ice cream. Lol
No. But I liked the reference. I had another poem that I have lost, where I referenced Nirvana’s Smells like teen spirit.
Mosquito’s wings here symbolize inferiority. For their tiny wings comparing with flies. Idk why it came to my mind. But I used it.I didn’t know about the contest. The setting of this poem is in a cafe but the themes has nothing to do with coffee.
I don’t remember this scene. I think I’ll rewatch it one day.
Thank you for reading and for the comments, DK. “)
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Powerful work, my friend.
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Thank you, Thomas! “)
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Holy Shit, you won! Congratulations, M.E!
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Mosquito wings comes with mosquito responsiblities. The limitless ability of sucking. Hahaha
Thank you, DK! “)
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Damn mosquito…no chance with all those flies, just keep them off my ice cream cone.
This is so powerful in its imagery…and such a disgusting place…I think I will get my cone to go.j.
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Thank you Jacob! Appreciated. “)
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Read MoreTell all the truth but tell it slant — Dickinson You must tell Verity but slant itIt dazzles if too boldMakes it far too sharp to graspEven when it's retold A flash direct blinds simple SoulsAs Mysteries revealMore depth than Spotlights...
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Fantastic! As usual…
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Thanks Adagio…
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Thanks my dear… know what you mean… I am often far too blunt…
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I smiled after the first reading then read it twice more
something quite sating in those lines..much enjoyed!
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Beautifully penned, LDF. Liked this a lot my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Wow. Just wow.
So, did you want to fuck that woman in the restaurant or not?