“a carbon copy of creation’s
carbon based design
debased…defaced
vandalized
soon to erased
by those who would scandalize
the most basic of human interactions
replaced by something
unrecognizable
where hardly anything makes sense
these days simply because
it was meant to make sense
to someone else”

Naaj, that last stanza drove it home my friend. Brilliantly penned, and you brought receipts throughout. A Masterpiece, brother. Into the book it belongs! Much respect. Appreciate you.

Damian

I’d like to bookmark this but I’m not sure if I did or not. Still navigating like a Luddite here lol. I see you’ve been keen to the dark doings for some time. I’m somewhat of a tinfoil hat veteran myself. Once you merge science with spirituality there is no going back, and nothing can ever be unseen. It takes fortitude…and it’s been taking more & more as the years fly. This resonates, thanks for the posting!

An excellent observation on the dumbing down of America. People have become subservient to their phones. They don’t ask questions and they don’t think for themselves anymore. Tic Tock has poisoned so many young people alone. Interaction has been minimalized and your line about big brother is so true. We’re being manipulated for someone else’s benefit.

You’re about Tik Tok. That’s a very dangerous site. Big thx for the support, Tim
Much appreciated.

Beautifully penned, M.E. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Very interesting dialogue. Is this internal or external?
It is not about painting, I agree. nice work

Tremendous metaphor. Superb work.

Thank you my friend!! I appreciate it “) <3

This piece is worded so well. Great description and a wonderful imagination here. Nice work.

Thank you, Rosie C for the love and comment! “)

This is deeply, thought-provoking.

I like the use of numbers in this. It makes it look like a list in the structure of a poem.

It’s different and inspiring. I can sense a lot of patience from the writer in this piece.

Captivating choice of words. I’m slightly hooked in. x

Absolutely Awesome! Wow!
The phrases I love… “Sinful Redemption” (A paradoxical escape from salvation)
“secreting the nights away” (A novel spin from noun to verb – clandestine and furtive)
“your truth my undoing” (The curse of understanding)

Just an amazing piece of work, girl.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Amazing piece Crimsin!
Razor sharp ink.

You’re crushing it, Brenda!!! Luvin it!!!!

Naaj

Tremendous work. Vivid and sharp.

No apologies necessary, girl. This is what writing is for. Your catharsis. Hand over your feelings. The piece is strong and moving.

Meg

hello dearest Will thank you for the good advise I want to get past this feeling in my life and in my writing…sometimes I think I here my son asking me ma, what are you doing when I am unkind to myself…still I am grateful I had time with my son to be close to him before he died… I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕

Do whatever you need to do to survive…..write,cry,complain,run naked trough the streets if you have to…….just survive.

Take care and you have friends here that care even if from the other side of the earth.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. No apologies are needed, you grieve as long as you need to my friend. You’re working through your thoughts and emotions, writing is your therapy right now. I’m supportive because I also use my writing as therapy, I think it’s what writers do. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I felt this.