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Read MoreDoes it drive you mad deep inside? Knowing that I read through the lies It’s your tone the suggestion implied As darkness slowly claims your eyes Eventually the wheels fall off the car Tired engine sputters going nowhere Too busy wishing on some falling star Always...
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Drieks. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It was from the heart, indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Music, when being made, and left to people’s decisions, will always run into clashes between the makers of it. Sometimes it’s a clash of personalities, or other times some section of a song that’s causing derision. I once wrote an instrumental acoustic guitar song assuming it would go onto a CD we were making. The actual guitarist in the band used it for a limo ad he was making for a company.
Music is a spiritual thing. It’s a shame when animosity develops over it.
Good one, Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That is some twisted shit to do to a bandmate. Sorry, that happened to you brother. When we were in sync, we were a really good team. Before all the manipulative games began, people change, not always for the better. Music is a spiritual thing, I agree. Thanks for sharing part of your story, Tim. Appreciate you.
Damian
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When the passion is in the wrong place, nothing will ever reach the destination. I seriously with that album had come to fruition. I betcha one day he will too. Whether or not he ever acknowledges it…? What does one do when they realize they literally walked away from the talent? I would still love to have heard that album, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I wish the album came to fruition as well. I’ve always wondered will that day come, when he realizes that he ran from his talent as well. Most of all will he realize I was his biggest supporter, that I had his back, and if he believed half as much as I did he could have had his music heard. I’m more disappointed than anything, I guess. Thank you for your commentary, and for making me feel a little better my friend. I appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like the ring of, “True DeadLove Style.” Thank you, it takes an authentic person to recognize another. Right back at you! Appreciate you.
Damian
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend, you’ve been on a roll lately. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Damian thank you graciously 💕
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thank you beautiful poetess for such a lovely comment 💕
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Superb work.
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you graciously sometimes I wonder if my writes aren’t strange but you have to go as inspired I’m happy this spoke to you 💕
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WHEN I SAY I FELT THIS, IT MEANS
I THIS EVERY EVERY WORD OF YOUR VOICE…BUT THIS RIGHT HERE, OOUUFF!“truthfully I fail in this mission every day
with small steps forward
becoming the companion that was first desired”DAMN IT WOMAN!
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that didn’t come out right, emotionally everywhere but you know what mean, ha!
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest poet thank you graciously good evening I wasn’t sure how this one would be accepted I’m so happy it spoke to you 💕 and yes I think your comment was great and I understood 😊
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. I think it’s something everybody fails at, myself included. It’s not meant to be easy, and sometimes are human nature gets the best of us. Very introspective write my friend. I can relate. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian for understanding I hate like for example when I am short tempered I have to work on this 💕
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The night is also when the pain hits for me. I don’t know how it is for others but the older I get the more painful life becomes. More stressful and overwhelming. Guess getting help would be best, but I’m kinda the strong one that holds up my little world. No time for breakdowns.
*Hug* you’re not alone, friend.
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hello dearest Nick good morning I think as we get older because for one thing I know I was fearless and careless when I was younger..now I am careful and cautious understanding each moment is important thank you for the love here hugs on our shared pain in the night 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write as always my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
good morning Damian I hope you have a beautiful day thank you my friend 💕
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Vivid and sharp.
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hello dearest Thomas good evening thank you graciously have a great night 💕
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Hoi hoi
There’s a theory, that says that the first 4 sentences determine if the reader wil go on reading. In other words, have you captured the attention.And sometimes insidious greed, the needful way one is enough.
Very nice write. Thank you!
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hello good morning dearest Gus I wasn’t writing yesterday and that line kept coming to mind just one line so I sat down and wrote it I’m happy it held your interest and you liked it great eye 💕
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This is wonderful, Brenda. The audio with it makes it come to life for the reader. I did not expect any less from you, of course!
Daniel
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hello dearest Daniel thank you graciously for the love on this write 💕it is deeply appreciated…
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you pardon my tardy response I appreciate you 💕
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Written from the heart. Thank you for sharing Damian.